First song on kara-moon forum

[Alienz]

Hi guys,
Here's my first song on the kara-moon forum. Its an old song i found again recently but it almost sounds finished, still not sure yet, sometimes i feel theres something 'missing'

[Laguna Rising]

Hi Alienz
This is a atmosphere-based track and it's very simple so far
There's room for more melodies (unless you want to keep it on the minimalistic side  )
The pad and rhythm are ok and I like the noisy bass.

Cheers

[Alienz]

Thanx for listening laguna
Its indeed one of the simplest tracks i made. What you're syaing is exactly my'dillema' , its atmpspheric and there is a lot room for more but maybe a minimalistic track now and then is a good thing to do?

[Laguna Rising]

maybe a minimalistic track now and then is a good thing to do?

  oh, I see, I have to agree, sometimes I like to change style too 

[kara]

I wouldn't change anything 
As a minimalistic track it is perfect, it has a certain mood which you will break if you add other instruments.

Nice track 

k

[Alienz]

Thanx Kara!
I did indeed try adding all sorts of different instruments, melodic and rhythmic but like you say, everything i did try seemed to break the mood

[MarioD]

I wouldn't change anything 
As a minimalistic track it is perfect, it has a certain mood which you will break if you add other instruments.

Nice track 

k

Ditto

I love it the way it is!

[Oren]

I'm with the rest of the crew on this one. Complete in every way.

Tasteful, musical, original.

Oren.

[Alienz]

Thanx Oren and Mario!