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Author Topic: Water Armageddon: new track  (Read 6235 times)
Frederik
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« on: July 04, 2008, 07:38:42 PM »

A short track I just put together, a little bit more up tempo for once.
With english (or something supposed to be english) lyrics this time  Tongue

All comments and suggestions are appreciated!

frederik

* water armageddon (alt record)4.mp3 (4297.19 KB - downloaded 264 times.)
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« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2008, 09:53:25 PM »

I love this little song.
It takes me right back to the late 60's/early 70's.
Great acoustic guitar and organ sounds. Very evocative of that time.
The general mix sounds a bit 'muddy' to me, but cleaned up this could be a little classic.
Well done.
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« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2008, 11:01:56 PM »

Everyone seems to beat me to it these days Roll Eyes

I agree with James, this is a great little song, an the playing is right on the button. I wonder if it would help to try a bit of EQ on the guitar to reduce the mid range resonance a little.
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« Reply #3 on: July 05, 2008, 03:55:43 AM »

Fred,

I heartily agree with James-quite an impeccable retro sound...very artfully done! Afro

Thom
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« Reply #4 on: July 05, 2008, 07:57:17 AM »

Neat! Some creative equalization and stereo placement will give each instrument its voice in the mix.
Reminds me of 1970. Jefferson Airplane.
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« Reply #5 on: July 05, 2008, 07:19:09 PM »

I love this little song.
It takes me right back to the late 60's/early 70's.
Great acoustic guitar and organ sounds. Very evocative of that time.
The general mix sounds a bit 'muddy' to me, but cleaned up this could be a little classic.
Well done.
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James

I agree with James.

Super song.
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« Reply #6 on: July 06, 2008, 10:47:18 AM »

I love this little song.
It takes me right back to the late 60's/early 70's.
Great acoustic guitar and organ sounds. Very evocative of that time.
The general mix sounds a bit 'muddy' to me, but cleaned up this could be a little classic.
Well done.
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James

I agree with James.

Super song.

And I agree with Mario. Cheesy

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« Reply #7 on: July 06, 2008, 02:00:02 PM »

Reminds me of 1970. Jefferson Airplane.

  Grin yeah, that's the feel i got from it Wink
Very 70's sound and arrangement, excellent coherence in this production

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« Reply #8 on: July 07, 2008, 09:33:37 AM »

Thanks for checking it out, and all the kind words!

I sound like an era when I wasn't even born, kinda funny in a way  Grin

I'll see what i can do about the mix, you guys are right that it sounds a bitt muffled (and that the mid of the guitar - the resonance - is a bit to prominent)

See you around, and stay tuned for more things to come!

fred
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