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SoundKlops
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« on: April 10, 2009, 10:12:24 AM »

This song needs a melody. Can someone help? The chords are C/Am/F/G. I think the song is something like Rock'n Roll.

Andreas

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« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2009, 08:28:23 PM »

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Hey, Andreas,

This is a pretty standard R'n'R set of phrases.
What are you looking for here?
If you want a straightforward guitar part I can do it.
If you are looking for a song ... do you have lyrics?
If you have something to share we may be able to get the Elderly Brothers to join in here, maybe  Roll Eyes

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« Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 08:26:07 AM »

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Hey, Andreas,

This is a pretty standard R'n'R set of phrases.
What are you looking for here?
If you want a straightforward guitar part I can do it. Very good idea!
If you are looking for a song ... do you have lyrics? A very very good idea! But my english is too bad, so I am not able to write lyriks and I am not a singer. If someone (you?) can write some lyriks and someone likes to sing, welcome!

If you have something to share we may be able to get the Elderly Brothers to join in here, maybe  Roll Eyes That would be very nice


Andreas


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« Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 10:22:55 AM »

Hmmm. 8 bar boogie. Would work very well with a song. Should be very easy to drop a melody on top of it for a singer. Let's see what The Elderlies come up with and maybe I can slide something in too Smiley

Closing chord should modulate to the first one. Sort of Daaaa - Dum Grin
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« Reply #4 on: April 12, 2009, 01:15:34 PM »

Thank You Will.

You are perfectly right, the end must be still changed.

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« Reply #5 on: April 12, 2009, 03:45:14 PM »

 Cheesy
Just to set this thing rolling ....
Here is a format which is : 16bars verse, 8bars chorus.  Same again another twice, then 16bars instrumental followed by 8bars chorus.
All rough takes, of course.  Roll Eyes
I think my older twin brother may be able to cobble together some lyrics that would fit into this pattern.
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« Reply #6 on: April 12, 2009, 04:28:35 PM »

Fits quite nicely.

If there's a vocal going on top I would suggest quite a bit of reverb on the guitar to push it back, and possibly pan it slightly to one side.
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« Reply #7 on: April 12, 2009, 04:29:51 PM »

This incites memories..

 Cheesy Tongue

I'll take it out for a spin and see if I can come up with something.

Cool

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« Reply #8 on: April 12, 2009, 04:33:05 PM »

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If there's a vocal going on top I would suggest quite a bit of reverb on the guitar to push it back
Will, the whole guitar line is only as a 'marker' to help place a vocal.
If it does turn into a song I would re-work the guitar to fit round the vocal line.
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« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2009, 01:48:07 PM »

 wOO wOO

This would be a great fun Grin

I made a new ending, but I'm not really happy with this.

If you have a file with vocals or guitar (or something other) for me, you can send it via e-mail to ellie@soundklops.de

Andreas

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« Reply #10 on: April 16, 2009, 11:56:10 PM »

Andreas, I am not a singer by any stretch of the imagination.  So here in my instrumental version based on your chord progression.

I hope you like it.

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« Reply #11 on: April 17, 2009, 02:01:35 PM »

Very good work Mario! Cool

May I ask you if you can send me a file with your guitar playing only? So I could make some experiments with mixing. That would be a great pleasure for me.

Andreas
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« Reply #12 on: April 17, 2009, 03:55:12 PM »

Very good work Mario! Cool

May I ask you if you can send me a file with your guitar playing only? So I could make some experiments with mixing. That would be a great pleasure for me.

Andreas

Absolutely no problem!

What format would you like it in?  MP3, Ape or Flac?
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« Reply #13 on: April 17, 2009, 04:05:14 PM »

Hi Mario,

I have no problems with mp3 or wav. You can send the file to ellie@soundklops.de

Many Thanks
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« Reply #14 on: April 17, 2009, 10:11:19 PM »

Did you get my email with the guitar part?
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