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bahgheera
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« on: March 19, 2007, 02:25:52 AM »

It's been so long since I've posted anything to the auditorium, due to my year long creativity strike... bummer. Sad

So here's a track that just sort of fell together suddenly this afternoon. It's not finished, needs to have a detail layer applied and a LOT more variation on the drum track, but you get the general idea. Hopefully I'll go back and finish this one.

Thanks for listening...

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EDIT: Ok, no one has noticed apparently. HEY PEEPZ! I DID SOME VOX AND GUITAR AND DRUMS AND STUFF AND... AND STUFF!!! :hehe:
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« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2007, 01:42:46 PM »

this has a cool smooth groove to it, liked it so far...really set up nice for a vocal and leadline, worth finishing
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« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2007, 01:52:45 PM »

Glad to hear that your strike is over  Cool
And a nice start you have here, this has to become a great song !

Looking forward to the finished version

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« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2007, 07:03:10 PM »

Hey Bahgs!  Like the organ tone. Has a Whiter Shade of Pale vibe (one of my all time favorite tunes). Perhaps needs a little more development, and some vocals would probably be cool.

Let us know if you take it any further. Would def want to hear it!
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« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2007, 09:04:53 PM »

Nice moody track. Definitely waiting for some vocals to be applied. Could be a good one.
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« Reply #5 on: March 20, 2007, 01:14:12 AM »

Hey Baggy

Love it. Needs Vocals...

Really cool vibe IMO...

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« Reply #6 on: March 20, 2007, 08:00:54 PM »

an excellent start. Really lovely organ sound. I'm glad to hear you're not on strike anymore. Hopefully you will comeback to this one and add some embellishments. Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: March 20, 2007, 08:16:54 PM »

Lovely Organ and very nice sound and Melody in general... Wink
It's a combination of chords I love to use too..

Very nice, add vocals to it.

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« Reply #8 on: March 20, 2007, 08:54:55 PM »

Hi bahgheera
Very nice and relaxed mood, I love the melody.
It reminds me a bit of the 1st song on the last John Mayer album.
Nice progression, Keep on.

Cheers
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« Reply #9 on: March 20, 2007, 09:32:49 PM »

Cool groove, love the bass slide.
Hmm anyone  that can vocals?
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« Reply #10 on: March 20, 2007, 10:07:18 PM »

Thanks for the critiques y'all. Glad to see all the familiar faces, especially Van Greco - I still have a rock song that I need to release, never really finished that up with you bud.

Laters...
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« Reply #11 on: March 23, 2007, 09:42:07 PM »

Hi Bahg,

wow, a super relaxing song, coooool  Cool
If you dont add a voice, I think a sax could be cool  Grin
Yeah, work on it, it's really a promising one!

Thanks

bye

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« Reply #12 on: March 25, 2007, 09:45:01 PM »

New version; hold on a mo, I know I can't sing - those vox are just a placeholder until someone with a good voice comes along. So who's up for some black crows style vocals? Anyone? Anyone? Smiley

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« Reply #13 on: March 28, 2007, 01:52:04 AM »

BUUUUUUUUUUUUMPIDDY!
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« Reply #14 on: March 28, 2007, 06:35:39 PM »

Hi Bahgs. Really like it. Great mood. And your singing ain't bad. But it might be worth a try to get Van Greco to sing this one. Grin Don't tell him I told you so.

If I'm not mistaking I think the delay on the guitar is a bit out of sync with the rhythm of the track. I would pan the rhythm guitar a bit left or right. And maybe use a high pass on the guitar (or adjust the guitarsound) to make some room for the bass which seems to get lost a bit.
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