Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now

[UMEU]

Hello

Just wanted to share with the rest of you a link to a music i'm working now and maybe receive
some valuable feedback and suggestions for improvement.
It has a sort of non-western sound (explores double harmonic scale) and it's a non finalized version.
Hope you like it.
Cheers and thanks for listening.
UMEU

http://soundcloud.com/umeu/w-i-p-008-06-12-09-01-export-19-12-09

[kara]

Sounds good, gives a dark oriental taste. Something you don't hear often.
In the second part it needs some variations and/or some counter melodies to keep the interest of the listener.

k

[folderol]

Very impressive work. Gives a very eirie atmosphere. However, I agree with Rpony that it could do with more development.

[UMEU]

Thanks very much for listening
It's indeed in an early stage. However i'll consider the observations made as I agree with them.

[MarioD]

you have a great start here 

Sounds good, gives a dark oriental taste. Something you don't hear often.
In the second part it needs some variations and/or some counter melodies to keep the interest of the listener.

k

I also agree with Ronny.

[Oren]

you have a great start here 

If this track is aimed at the dance/trance listeners, your "lack" of variation may be just what the mood needs. Well done!

[UMEU]

Hi there and happy new year for all of you.

Here is a "final" version of the thing. Did i get "lost" somewhere ?

Cheers

UMEU

http://soundcloud.com/umeu/lost

[kara]

And happy new year to you

No, you dind't get lost, good sound layers in the second part that keeps the listeners attention 
Despite that it is pretty short (3min) for a trance track I think it's the perfect length.

Good work

k