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« Reply #30 on: March 06, 2010, 08:27:10 AM »

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Thanks Mario ....
looking forward to that  Cool

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« Reply #31 on: March 06, 2010, 12:50:25 PM »

mario..
moi also looking forward to it.
i got a question for you chaps.
(its difficult i know cos we arent in a studio
where song arrangement discussions can take place rapidly.)
how do you hear this song ending up ..
"sound picture wise".
do you hear it sparse ?? just groovin along ??
OR..with lots of likkle instrumental flourishes
(sax ?? harmonca ?? flute ?? violin ??)
coming in and out of the song ??

by the way Offthewall. fyi..
decades ago i went to uni , not far from you mate.
(i'm showing my age..lol...but saw Who live
with mooney on drums, may he rip.
twas a wild night. totally bonkers.lol.)
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« Reply #32 on: March 06, 2010, 01:24:45 PM »

Personally I hear it sparse, think “Fever”.

However it’s up to everyone else.  When it comes to collaborations I generally overplay my part so the song’s author can pick and choose what they want.  I just consider myself as a hired hand.
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« Reply #33 on: March 06, 2010, 02:58:46 PM »

Yes, I think I agree with Mario.

I usually tend to 'overdo' arrangements and throw everything in, but with this one I have a fancy for letting it creep along with instrument 'phrases' being dropped in at the right moments.

I'm looking forward to getting some more material to mix in.  Kiss


Manning .... interesting that you know my corner of the world... we'll have to chat about it in another thread, mate.  Cool

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« Reply #34 on: March 06, 2010, 03:47:31 PM »

Here is my take of the song.  The guitar parts are the first thing that came to mind.  Feel free to use all, some or none of it.  If you want more and/or have any ideas on what I can add please feel free to contact me.

I’ve included an OGG file of just my raw guitar part, i.e. no compression or other effects.  This should line up with the mp3 track.

Let me know what you think.

* JM.mp3 (3275.59 KB - downloaded 110 times.)
* JM guitar part.ogg (2773.14 KB - downloaded 104 times.)
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« Reply #35 on: March 06, 2010, 04:25:43 PM »

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Thanks, Mario.

Gonna have some fun slicing things up.  Cool

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« Reply #36 on: March 06, 2010, 06:35:24 PM »

This is comming together nicely, great vibes  Cool

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« Reply #37 on: March 06, 2010, 08:35:26 PM »

okey dokey...
sparse it is.
i'm guilty of often overdoing it. lol.
looking forward to hearing the new mix with marios
parts in.

ps..offthewall...in my crazy youth
i had lots of fun in the norh of england.
always had a soft spot for the north..
i'm a londoner by birth.
(sorry bout that..lol i had no say in the matter..
my grandad was from the north. )
god bless.
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« Reply #38 on: March 06, 2010, 09:36:12 PM »

Kara,
glad you are listening  Kiss
Would your Azell like to contribute a few phrases on the 'sax' ?

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« Reply #39 on: March 06, 2010, 10:23:58 PM »

Maturing nicely so far  Cool
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« Reply #40 on: March 06, 2010, 10:50:21 PM »

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Manning
I go to bed when you are just starting out ....

Do you fancy making a 'final' vocal ... based on the ruff that we already have.  Just the vox with no backing and no processing.  Do as before and stick a marker on the front for lining up.  Render it to OGG stereo and I may be able to get a reasonable mix by tomorrow night.   Roll Eyes

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« Reply #41 on: March 07, 2010, 01:38:00 AM »

offthewall
(btw in uk you are 5 hrs ahead of me.
8.21pm here , so your in beddy byes asleep at 1.21am.)

re final vocal.
before doing this...i need heavy critique//input
on the guide vocal, n anything people dont like.
1. are the lyrics ive added fine ??
if so i'll keep to the lyrics as they stand.
2. what bout the cheeky "she kissed me" at end.
ok for the song ??
3. any vocal words themselves that dont work ??
4. the general texture of the vocs ??
anything people would like changed ??
or..for example any phrase ive sung where people
go "ugh"...dont like it.
or where its obvious a note is very sharp or flat.
(i dont use autotune n dont believe in it..lol.)
i mean hit me with critique n i'll try n change anything
people dont like. cos what might sound fine to moi might
not with you good chaps.
i just need guidance cos often i'm too close to it.
and others spot what i might have missed.

if whole new vocs are needed , i wont be able to do it
till wednesday cos ive set aside wednesday the whole
day for this song (and thursday if need be) but sunday thru tuesday
i have family things with my dear wife cos she is off from work
n i like to give her some fun in her days off from work.

however if you want the ruff vocs as they are totally dry
(no processing) i can send em tomorrow (sunday) if that helps
with your mixing . (as an ogg file if you wish )

god bless.
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« Reply #42 on: March 07, 2010, 03:05:08 AM »

Manning, personally I would NOT change a thing.

I really like it as is.

Maybe we can talk James into keeping what he has now Wink
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« Reply #43 on: March 07, 2010, 08:31:04 AM »

Good morning ...08.28 here. Just had breakfast.

I'm fine with keeping the vocals as they are.
All you need do is send me the unprocessed file, preferably in stereo and OGG.

I'll take it from there.  Lips Sealed

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« Reply #44 on: March 07, 2010, 01:08:51 PM »

chaps.
08.10am here..need my b'fast..lol.
attached are raw vocs stereo ogg as requested.
no fx etc. dry.
(normally i send mono to folks, any reason for stereo ??
no matter.)
didnt realise these would be finals so ,
prolly need a bit o' clean up.
but simple in reap to do.
this was a very nice song idea offthewall imho,
i find it a catchy tune. fun to do.
music line up is at front (for deletion).
tell me if all ok.
i used one a' me diy mic pre's on it .
god bless.

* stoggvocs.ogg (6019.78 KB - downloaded 89 times.)
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