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NeoN
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« Reply #15 on: October 05, 2011, 09:31:54 AM »

Thanks Thom Wink

I might consider softening the guitar a little bit.
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« Reply #16 on: October 10, 2011, 09:03:23 PM »

I like the piano and big orchestral sound wOO This is something Kara would enjoy, but the style is still very accessible to the average listener.
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« Reply #17 on: October 11, 2011, 02:09:14 PM »

 Cool
Watching with interest for further developments, Peter  Cool

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« Reply #18 on: October 12, 2011, 08:12:58 PM »

Excellent development  Smiley Sounds really good about melody's work.
Sounds a bit too 'bright' in EQ, but this is my taste.
Needs a bass foundation also I think.
I have tried a few second another general EQ.
I started by lowering 31 Hz a little bit, pushing up 60/62 Hz to a high level.
Lowered a little 500 Hz, triple more at 1KHz.
It's just a start  Grin
Waiting for next version  Cool
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« Reply #19 on: October 13, 2011, 06:51:13 PM »

Merci Magmavander! Smiley

I will definitely add a bassline, no doubt about it.
Thanks a lot for your suggestions on the EQ man.

I'm really sorry I haven't found time to work on the song yet guys, it seems I'm a little too busy these days.
Do we have a deadline?

I really want this to sound perfect and I hope it will in the end, but if you feel I am holding back the whole project just go on without my song.
I'd be happy even if this became an extra download or something.


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« Reply #20 on: October 13, 2011, 06:59:57 PM »

Cool
Watching with interest for further developments, Peter  Cool

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Thank you very much James Smiley

Stay tuned for updated versions!
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« Reply #21 on: October 13, 2011, 08:49:15 PM »

I found this composition very well, but just a little too short. 1 or 2 additional minutes would be very nice. I love the passage of the violins. Good progress, just continue a little
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« Reply #22 on: October 28, 2011, 09:28:13 AM »

Very nice, wonderful piano playing! I would recommend breaking up the chord progression at some point though with some different chords, just to have a little break, and maybe also vary the drums a bit - have a fill here and there. Sounds really great though!
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« Reply #23 on: October 28, 2011, 07:23:34 PM »

Thank you Marc, I agree about the piano and I may do some more different chords. Not sure though.
The song is going very well so far Wink
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« Reply #24 on: June 29, 2012, 03:20:50 AM »

Peter,

Version 2 is great!
In my opinion, a finished song - unless you want to make it a little longer...

What's the plan, Dude? Grin
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