NeoN
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« on: September 11, 2011, 05:37:00 PM » |
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Hey guys,
Here's a little expansion on the main track.
I decided to make this song more Piano-oriented.
Added Harps, Marcato and a new Piano part for the Chorus.
Hope you guys like this......
Peter
New version right here:
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folderol
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« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2011, 05:53:28 PM » |
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Very good start. Has lots of possibilities.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2011, 06:16:27 PM » |
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Very good start. Has lots of possibilities.
Agreed.  -Thom |
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Azell
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« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2011, 06:39:13 PM » |
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très bon début, combien de temps pour la suite??  |
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Oren
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« Reply #4 on: September 11, 2011, 09:40:23 PM » |
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...here's my demo of what I'm working on for the album...
Probably the nicest storm I've ever heard...  |
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« Reply #5 on: September 12, 2011, 11:56:48 PM » |
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Very good start. Has lots of possibilities.
Agreed. -Thom A BIG +1 |
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NeoN
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« Reply #6 on: September 13, 2011, 08:34:10 AM » |
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Thanks guys. I'll try to make this sound good in the end....!  |
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« Reply #7 on: September 16, 2011, 07:31:24 PM » |
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oh yes! Very good start. A charming main theme  Something that makes you feel happy and dreamy. Thanks!! |
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NeoN
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« Reply #8 on: September 18, 2011, 06:33:38 PM » |
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Magma, merci pour vos bons mots!! I hope this sounded right Check out my new version........  |
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #9 on: September 18, 2011, 07:11:46 PM » |
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By eliminating the original version,there's no basis for comparison and since I don't recall the original in detail,I really don't have an opinion to offer....sorry.
-Thom
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« Reply #10 on: September 18, 2011, 08:42:06 PM » |
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Unfortunately I lost the copy I had of the original (I usually keep just about everything) so, like Thom, find it a bit difficult to remember what it was like. This sounds improved from what I remember, with a greater variation of instruments.
The end seems rather abrupt so I do hope you'll continue to develop this and round it off nicely.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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NeoN
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« Reply #11 on: September 18, 2011, 09:21:43 PM » |
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Sorry guys!
I will re-upload the 1st version tomorrow.
Thanks!
Old version uploaded
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Azell
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« Reply #12 on: September 27, 2011, 07:24:40 PM » |
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j'attends toujours la suite  Azell |
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NeoN
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« Reply #13 on: September 28, 2011, 07:29:06 AM » |
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Thanks Azell! This is still work-in-progress..... |
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #14 on: October 02, 2011, 02:32:35 AM » |
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A notable improvement over the previous version,but the heavy metal style guitar seems very out of place,especially so,without a bass-line.
-Thom
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