KVR April Sunny Rains in the Plains

[shrikant]

Hello,
This month the time limit is of 30 seconds and we are supposed to present a musically complete and meaningful idea within that time frame. If the title and my music clicks with you,my idea will complete. "Sunny Rains in the Plains" Does it communicate ? Or is it tolerable at least ?

Please do let me know what you felt, even if it did not connect.

Thanks.

Shrikant 

[Oren]

Does it communicate ? Or is it tolerable at least ?
Please do let me know what you felt, even if it did not connect.

From a "feeling" point of view, it did "connect", and I enjoyed it.
 However, the sensation is of being presented a random sampling of a larger composition - interesting, but not complete in itself - without a definitive beginning or end, and lacking a coherent musical statement.

[shrikant]

Oren,

Thanks for listening and letting me know what you felt.

That is very helpful.Thanks once again.

Shrikant

[MarioD]

I liked very much what I heard.  However I did not think it was a “complete and meaning idea”!  I thought it was a teaser.  You know those 30 second fragments of a song on line stores play so you can hear part of what you might want to buy.

FWIW – I do think this is an excellent start of a song and I, for one, would like you to finish this one.  I was hooked in the first 10 seconds but left hanging there 20 seconds later.  I think this one is worth the effort to make into a complete song.

[Azell]

I love too, but the end is cut short too. But it is very difficult in 30 seconds! and ok with Mario to continue
good luck

[shrikant]

Many Thanks,Mario and Azell.
You  made me think about taking it further and giving it a better structure.   

Thanks a lot.

Shrikant