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shrikant
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« on: December 30, 2013, 10:04:41 AM »

A Departure,is the name of the new track I made. Would love to have your response.
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shrikant

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« Reply #1 on: December 30, 2013, 10:30:41 PM »

Well! This is very different from anything I've heard from you before. Overall I like it, but find the percussion fights the rest.
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« Reply #2 on: December 31, 2013, 03:26:58 PM »

Well! This is very different from anything I've heard from you before. Overall I like it, but find the percussion fights the rest.

Thanks,folderol. Grin
All these days I have been guided,advised by friends over here and at kvr. Thanks for the observation. I too felt the percussion was bit loud.But did not have a better idea.
Thanks once again.
Happy New Year
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« Reply #3 on: January 01, 2014, 11:04:16 PM »

Yes this is very different!

FWIW-I would drop the drums completely.  I do not think this one needs drums, especially those drums.  IMHO this would be an outstanding piece of music but the drums really detracted me.


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« Reply #4 on: January 02, 2014, 09:19:00 AM »

Yes this is very different!

FWIW-I would drop the drums completely.  I do not think this one needs drums, especially those drums.  IMHO this would be an outstanding piece of music but the drums really detracted me.

Mario D thanks for the suggestion.
While I was in the process of building this track an affable public figure passed away.I added drums to the track and named it A departure and posted it at relevant places without naming the person directly.Since it was not meant for him in the first place, I left out details. Probably due to the sad situation many people liked it and I too overlooked my own reservations about it.  Now I have removed the drum track and replaced the file here.I feel it sounds better now.Thanks for the observation.
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« Reply #5 on: January 02, 2014, 07:18:24 PM »

This is much better.

It is now outstanding  wOO
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« Reply #6 on: January 02, 2014, 09:27:34 PM »

Agree. This works much better now.
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« Reply #7 on: January 03, 2014, 01:40:04 AM »

This is much better.

It is now outstanding  wOO

Happy that it sounds better now. Smiley
Thanks Mario and folderol for the valuable input.

Thanks once again. Smiley
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« Reply #8 on: January 07, 2014, 08:44:57 AM »

Lush, emotive...
(and very good without the percussion Kiss)
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« Reply #9 on: January 07, 2014, 12:25:10 PM »

Lush, emotive...
(and very good without the percussion Kiss)

Thanks Oren. Smiley
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