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shrikant
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« on: March 22, 2014, 02:53:06 PM » |
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My new track. There are any number of streets open. Effort is to open possibilities of exploration. Hope you like it.  Thanks. (Modified version has been posted tanking in to account the suggestion given by friends. Thanks to all) |
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« Last Edit: March 29, 2014, 04:01:04 AM by shrikant »
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Oren
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...just looking for clues...
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« Reply #1 on: March 25, 2014, 10:36:06 PM » |
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Yes, I DO like it...  A suggestion: for my taste, create a slightly more interesting percussion track, or perhaps remove it altogether. |
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shrikant
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« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2014, 04:31:44 AM » |
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Yes, I DO like it... A suggestion: for my taste, create a slightly more interesting percussion track, or perhaps remove it altogether. Many Thanks Oren. I will think about your suggestion. This one began as a "marching" tune for kvr competition this month. Somehow it took a different shape and direction as it progressed. The percussion remained from the first attempt. |
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MarioD
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« Reply #3 on: March 26, 2014, 01:08:18 PM » |
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IMHO this would be a fantastic piece of music if you took out the percussion. Without the percussion this is just beautiful but the percussion ruined it for me. But that may be just me and others may not agree.
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shrikant
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« Reply #4 on: March 26, 2014, 01:39:43 PM » |
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IMHO this would be a fantastic piece of music if you took out the percussion. Without the percussion this is just beautiful but the percussion ruined it for me. But that may be just me and others may not agree.
Thanks Mario. Now I have to think of it seriously. Oren also mentioned something similar. Thanks a lot. |
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folderol
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« Reply #5 on: March 26, 2014, 06:49:31 PM » |
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I don't want to seem negative, but it was the percussion that rather put me off too. It just doesn't seem to fit, otherwise I liked what you did.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2014, 07:31:20 PM » |
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There's enough creativity in the track, but something definitelly doesn't work with the percussion.
Looking forward for the next version....
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shrikant
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« Reply #7 on: March 29, 2014, 04:02:50 AM » |
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I don't want to seem negative, but it was the percussion that rather put me off too. It just doesn't seem to fit, otherwise I liked what you did.
Thanks folderol and Moon for the input. I have re-posted the track with modifications. Hope you like it. Please keep telling me however negative the remark may be. It will help me. Thanks once again to all the friends. |
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folderol
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« Reply #8 on: March 29, 2014, 10:23:24 PM » |
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #10 on: March 30, 2014, 07:38:17 PM » |
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« Reply #11 on: March 31, 2014, 07:33:46 AM » |
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