APPOLLO - Mixture - Preview

[Appollo]

Hi, i'm looking for experts, i would like to know what  you think about my preview, the full mixtape is coming soon !
I can't upload here so here is the link

https://soundcloud.com/arthur-latge/mixture-preview

Waiting impatiently for your feedbacks
Thanks
Appollo

[Oren]

Interesting stuff!

What is your principal instrument?

[Appollo]

Bass & Keyboard & saxo and then i work a lot on ableton !
About that track, lot of electric bass and keyboard
I used to be a musician and now i'm learning softwares like traktor and ableton to be completely independent !
(Sorry for my english, i'm a french student )

[MarioD]

I’m not a pro but I think this is really good.

PS – you ARE a musician!

[Appollo]

Thx a lot !
Actually thanks to softwares like traktor i enjoy djing as much as playing an instrument ! And doing lives as a dj is just great !
Thx for your answers !
i'm working on a mixtape of acid jazz i'll post it soon !

[Moon]

Overall, a nice sound. Very good transition at 3:20.
The part between 2:00 and 3:00 kind of loose the vibe for me. I think if you shorten this part, the song as a whole would become better. Also be carefull with the bass line in this part. Mathimatically, the bass sits OK, without making the vibe stronger. This in contrast with the part after 3:20 where everything comes perfectly together.
Well done.

Moon

[Appollo]

Thx for the advice !