retrononomusic
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« on: September 12, 2014, 02:06:13 PM » |
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Hi guys, are you ready for another song?  So here's this one : http://youtu.be/GZQEL-Zvq5YThe lyrics are about difficult days of my youth, I've tried to pass the feeling with this song, hope it will work. I would really pleased to know what you think of it. ;-) Nono. |
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« Reply #2 on: September 13, 2014, 05:39:25 PM » |
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retrononomusic
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« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2014, 08:29:54 PM » |
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Thank you guys! Elwood, you're right I'm going to make it longer! ;-)
Nono.
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MarioD
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« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2014, 01:24:23 AM » |
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I agree with Thom that this is your best to date! Great job on this one!
IF you make it longer don't over do it. IMHO all you need to do is to add a tasty lead or maybe extend the tasty lead near the end a little. I would aim for around 3 minutes total at the most.
PS - personally I wouldn't change a thing but that is up to you.
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The older I get the better I was!
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retrononomusic
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« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2014, 07:33:32 PM » |
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Thank you Mario!
In fact, it gave me new ideas for the ending... I'm trying them out and I'll let you know!
Thank again for your help!
Nono.
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retrononomusic
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« Reply #6 on: October 26, 2014, 05:40:51 PM » |
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And here's the video clip for the song, filmed in Québec, Canada. ) I've also added an end to the song as suggested. ;-) http://youtu.be/rSDUl3NLcA4Hope you'll like it. Nono. |
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« Reply #7 on: October 26, 2014, 07:25:03 PM » |
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Interesting vid. I like the switching between monochrome and colour. Good song, well produced.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #8 on: October 27, 2014, 12:44:52 AM » |
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And here's the video clip for the song, filmed in Québec, Canada. ) I've also added an end to the song as suggested. ;-) http://youtu.be/rSDUl3NLcA4Hope you'll like it. Nono. I love this video!Nice cut scenes,amazing footage...fits the music very well.  The clarity of this video is stunning...I wish I could figure out how to optimize videos specifically for YouTube...very impressive! |
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MarioD
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« Reply #9 on: October 29, 2014, 03:13:04 PM » |
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That was just fantastic  A great video that perfectly matched an outstanding song. This is a keeper. |
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retrononomusic
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« Reply #10 on: November 02, 2014, 06:27:03 PM » |
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Thank you! i will keep it! ) Nono. |
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