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folderol
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« on: September 13, 2015, 12:27:20 PM »

Title says it all. The theme is 'Autumn', so I went with 'Autumn Mist'

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* Autumn_Mist.mp3 (2338.9 KB - downloaded 246 times.)
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« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2015, 04:14:49 PM »

Some nice melodies & the end result should be quite interesting..once the arrangement is all ironed out. Cool One bit of a critique though...the oboe sound beginning at :39 is a bit too dry and abrupt.Since this song is already saturated quite a bit with reverb,I would suggest modifying the oboe sound,by adding a modicum of a chorus effect,as well as increasing the decay a bit,to eliminate the choppy-ness of it.
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« Reply #2 on: September 14, 2015, 06:13:18 PM »

Thanks Thom.
I tried adding chorus, but didn't like the effect. However, I then tried a small amount of reverb. That seems to work really well. It pushes it back in the mix, and gives a bit of a tail to the end of the notes.
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« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2015, 04:52:01 PM »

Will, this is fantastic and the best that you have done to date wOO

Very peaceful piece of music.

This is a keeper.
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« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2015, 05:04:54 PM »

Ta muchly Smiley
I'm honoured Smiley
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