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elwoodblues91
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« on: April 04, 2016, 01:28:24 AM »

Just uploaded my tune(hope I did it correctly.)I've completed my composition and I was thinking that some guitar work added to it,might make for a well rounded piece?This tune is designed for lyrics and perhaps someone may like to co-write the words(I have no lyrical ideas at the moment.)
The song is 4/4 time @ 125bpm.
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« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2016, 11:53:00 AM »

Just had a listen and can really see the potential in this piece.
You are right that it is shouting out for lyrics.
If you want to start off an idea I'd be happy to elaborate on it.
Also would contribute guitars if you can give me a rough chord outline.
Nice work Thom.

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« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2016, 12:28:39 PM »

Just had a listen and can really see the potential in this piece.
You are right that it is shouting out for lyrics.
If you want to start off an idea I'd be happy to elaborate on it.
Also would contribute guitars if you can give me a rough chord outline.
Nice work Thom.

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I will try to conjure up some lyrical ideas soon.Your guitar work in my song would be lovely...but I am sorry,as since I do not read music,I can't give you a chord outline(damn,I wish I had a notation software program!)
Thanks for your comments...very pleased you like my tune. Cool
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« Reply #3 on: April 04, 2016, 12:51:21 PM »

That's OK.
I can work it out, just takes longer.
Have to take a trip away this week so it could be a slow start.
A general idea or outline for lyrics would be good as once I get started on something I can usually embellish.
Might be nice to try a duet again?
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« Reply #4 on: April 04, 2016, 08:33:34 PM »

Very good so far, I agree it calls for vocals. I'll be interested to hear what James can add.
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« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2016, 08:44:31 PM »

Yes.
Don't suppose you have any notation software Will?
Would be nice to have that chord pattern worked out without the effort.
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« Reply #6 on: April 04, 2016, 10:03:30 PM »


Might be nice to try a duet again?

But of course! Wink
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« Reply #7 on: April 08, 2016, 01:51:57 AM »

I apologize for the delay...still working on the lyrics and I keep drawing blanks....I'm such a bleeding imbecile,when it comes to song lyrics(I have no poetic talent in me...whatsoever.)
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« Reply #8 on: April 08, 2016, 03:58:55 PM »

If you have an idea or rough outline I can usually work from that.
My start in lyric writing was always 'to a theme' so just let me know where you want it to go and we'll see how I manage.
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« Reply #9 on: April 09, 2016, 04:36:28 PM »

If you have an idea or rough outline I can usually work from that.
My start in lyric writing was always 'to a theme' so just let me know where you want it to go and we'll see how I manage.

Here's what I came up with thus far;

Desperate thoughts,of years gone by
Blinded by change,too aimless to try
So much is lost,yet so much ahead
The will remains,but my spirit is dead
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« Reply #10 on: April 09, 2016, 06:01:10 PM »

Woah ... bleak!
Do you anticipate a brighter outcome?
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« Reply #11 on: April 19, 2016, 05:47:30 PM »

This is really sad Cry
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« Reply #12 on: April 19, 2016, 05:51:35 PM »

There was a response in here from Thom but he has deleted it.
To be honest I did not respond to what he said as it made me feel like giving up on K-M once and for all.

Anyway ... got a new member today from KVR so at least 'someone' new is interested.
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« Reply #13 on: April 19, 2016, 08:38:49 PM »

So long as KM is here, so will I be. Never give up. Is my motto. It's a lesson I take from nature.

There is very special tree I know about. Over the years it has been struck by lightning, blown over in the '87 hurricane, and attacked by vandals. Bent, burned and scarred, it is still alive and is pushing out some lovely new growth this year.

Great to hear we have new users.
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