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« on: September 15, 2019, 06:54:28 PM »

Well, here's the first attempt. It is little more than an outline but hopefully you get the idea of where I'm going.

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« Reply #1 on: September 15, 2019, 08:08:28 PM »

I look forward to seeing how this develops, Will.
It is a beautifully enchanting composition with a few unexpected chord changes.
Great start.
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« Reply #2 on: September 16, 2019, 03:05:43 PM »

Thanks James,
I've more or less got everything in place now, there might be a few tweaks, but the structure is all there.
You're more than welcome to see what you can fit to it. The problem with the chords is that they are totally made up to match the melodies, mostly three note, but a bit 'different' Tongue

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« Reply #3 on: September 16, 2019, 05:40:02 PM »

Do you have a list of those chords?
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« Reply #4 on: September 17, 2019, 01:31:42 PM »

Not at the moment - I just fiddled about on the keyboard till it sounded right.
I'll try to note them down soon-ish.
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« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2019, 02:22:41 PM »

OK, here you go Grin

I've separated out the different sections, and also put line breaks at significant changes in the melody.

There is one chord I can't work out at all, so I've listed the individual notes I played in parenthesis!
Also, for  a repeat, or different inversion of the same chord, the second one is in round brackets.

1st
C (C), F, C

2nd
Em, Bm, EM, F, EM, C
G, Dm, F, C
G, C
G, C, Dm, Em, C

3rd
C, G, F, Em
D, Gm, F, G
C, Bb, Am, Bm
{d-e-g), C, G, Bm
Bb (Bb), F
Dm, Em, Bm, Em, C

4th
C (C)
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« Reply #6 on: September 19, 2019, 06:09:43 PM »

Thanks Will.
Some interesting combinations there, old son.
I'm away for the weekend but will take a proper look at this when time allows.
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« Reply #7 on: September 22, 2019, 01:16:32 PM »

This is a great sounding start.  I really like the tonal qualities of seconds one and two. 

This has the potential of being one of your best.
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« Reply #8 on: September 24, 2019, 09:16:59 PM »

Thanks a lot Mario, it'll be interesting to hear what James can come up with.
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« Reply #9 on: September 30, 2019, 01:15:08 PM »

Well ....
I just sat trying to get to grips with this one and come to the sad conclusion that it is not meant for guitar accompaniment!
Sorry, my friend.
Another time, perhaps.
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« Reply #10 on: October 01, 2019, 03:07:25 PM »

No Prob.
It is a bit 'out there' so I'm not surprised really. I'm sure there will be others Smiley
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« Reply #11 on: December 29, 2019, 04:39:55 AM »

Well, here's the first attempt. It is little more than an outline but hopefully you get the idea of where I'm going.

Is this song about a drafty window,or merely an advent of a new tune? Lovely chords & melodies and definitely a beginning that warrants an end. Cool
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« Reply #12 on: December 29, 2019, 04:32:53 PM »

Thanks Thom... and nice to see you here again Grin

Actually it's a complete tune now, and on soundcloud. It seems to be well received - apart from one person Smiley

https://soundcloud.com/soft-sounds/morning
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