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Author Topic: Daydreams of Nightdreams  (Read 2521 times)
MarioD
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« on: December 29, 2019, 12:19:59 AM »

Daydreams of Nightdreams

Sometimes your night dreams can be dark and in black and white.  But if you day dream the identical dream it may lighten up and be in full color.

Note that I have been working on this for some time now and I am way out of my comfort zone so please feel free to comment anyway you like.  I am always open to suggestions.

https://soundcloud.com/mario_guitar/daydreams-of-nightdreams
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« Reply #1 on: December 29, 2019, 04:44:57 PM »

This is a very impressive work Mario.

Being super critical. I think it's a bit uncertain at the start. Also you maintain sound 'density' throughout, a bit more light and dark or thin and thick would help I think.

Nevertheless a very creditably performance, especially (as you say) it is well outside your comfort zone Afro
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« Reply #2 on: December 29, 2019, 06:27:55 PM »

Thanx so much Will for those suggestions.  These are something that I will definitely keep in mind if/when I do another piece similar to this.  They are very good suggestions.
 
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« Reply #3 on: January 20, 2020, 05:08:44 AM »

Dramatic & ethereal chord progressions....nice instrumentation...very not bad! Cool
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« Reply #4 on: January 20, 2020, 02:50:47 PM »

Thanx so much Thom!
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