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NeoN
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« on: July 02, 2021, 04:26:16 PM »

Hello friends!

This is a tune I had made some time ago called "Sleeping Moon".
My friends from Kompoz (antonklinkt, JorgePaulo) jumped right in and enhanced this with their amazing Guitars!
I wish to add my vocals to this at some point in the future.

Not my usual style, but I really hope you enjoy this jazzy tune!

- Peter -

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« Reply #1 on: July 03, 2021, 05:52:35 PM »

This really good. A super backing track!

IMHO the beginning is screaming for a lead; I am assuming that is where your vocals will go.

Excellent guitar parts! 

PS - you have about a minute of dead space at the end of this.  You may want to delete that.

I think you really have a good bed for your vocals.
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« Reply #2 on: July 06, 2021, 07:20:21 AM »

Interesting mixture of sounds here. Collabs can produce really nice and unexpected results.
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« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2021, 04:05:49 PM »

Thank you for the feedback both!

This was an experimental track for me, and I am planning to add things to it.

I hope I come up with some lyrics and some vocals as well!

Regards.

- Peter -
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« Reply #4 on: July 12, 2021, 03:34:49 PM »

Very trippy arpeggios & a gripping chord progression. Afro  The ax track is a nice addition....though there is just the same chord melody throughout the tune(could use some changes.)
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