Wyatt
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« on: June 28, 2008, 04:14:09 PM » |
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Blue Flash..Two drum tracks and nine Stratocaster Tracks.  Wyatt |
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« Reply #1 on: June 28, 2008, 06:57:50 PM » |
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I enjoyed this a lot - nice tune and the guitar playing is excellent. Everything fits together well, although I felt that the rhythm guitar sounded a little harsh - but that's a minor quibble and not enough to spoil my enjoyment of a very good piece of music.
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« Reply #2 on: June 28, 2008, 09:15:12 PM » |
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It's that trademark sound again. Lovely layered production here. Full and rich. IMO the only thing missing is a strong bass line, otherwise....a beautiful piece.  James |
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« Reply #3 on: June 29, 2008, 12:30:30 AM » |
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I very much agree with James here. This is good but cries out for a solid bass.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
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« Reply #4 on: June 29, 2008, 01:15:31 AM » |
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Thank you gentlemen, for your kind words, and insightful comments. I appreciate you. FM: The ironic thing is that I worked hard on getting the "razor blades" into the rhythm guitar. The song is about a fellow I know who found himself at odd ends in his life, and then in a flash of insight, discovered a new sense of purpose. The rhythm guitar is the underlying edge in life, that we try to insulate ourselves from. I do see your point, however, and it wouldn't be the first time I went a bit overboard..moderation isn't one of my specialties.  James and Will: I did four bass tracks for this song, and while they did do a nice job of driving things, they totally took over melodically..here is a sample. Maybe someone could come up with one for me?? It would be nice to have a bottom on this..just not too much of a melody, if that makes sense. That would be v. cool. Wyatt |
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« Reply #5 on: June 29, 2008, 06:06:03 AM » |
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I love that style of playing of you Wyatt k |
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« Reply #6 on: June 29, 2008, 09:09:46 AM » |
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... and nine Stratocaster Tracks....
Nine  Some new guitar sounds here, and a definite inclination toward a trademark style. Style is good... |
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« Reply #7 on: June 29, 2008, 11:22:44 AM » |
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@Kara : Nice to hear from you..thanks buddy. @Oren: Yep, nine..I mentioned that to distinguish that there are no synth tracks in this..just sound-shaping the Strat. Wyatt |
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« Reply #8 on: July 01, 2008, 11:41:30 AM » |
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« Reply #9 on: July 01, 2008, 06:56:05 PM » |
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Woow ! an army of stratocasters marchin' in ! Nice tone, I love the feel and your guitar touch. Very good track Cheers |
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« Reply #10 on: July 02, 2008, 10:25:51 AM » |
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@Laguna Rising: Thanks for listening..I appreciate your comments. Wyatt |
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« Reply #11 on: July 03, 2008, 07:44:29 PM » |
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The 'elderly' bass is also a distinct improvement |
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #12 on: July 04, 2008, 01:05:19 AM » |
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Mmmm. I listened to both versions.. and it is very difficult to favor one or the other- the original is very crisp, showcasing your unique use of the guitar. Very impressive, but the second version is more balanced, softer- dunno. Maybe if the bass were just a wee bit lower? Top notch stuff regardless.
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I like.. sound.
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« Reply #13 on: August 22, 2008, 03:20:15 PM » |
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I really appreciate everyone taking the time to listen and comment. My lady made a picture for this song today, so I thought I would like to share it with you. Wyatt |
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« Reply #14 on: August 22, 2008, 03:23:07 PM » |
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Great picture  k |
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