Right from the get-go, the drums are 'baddass.' Oh, it's sounding like King Crimson...
Maybe take that 'delay' or whatever it is off of the drums at some point...
(man that's some sweet tone you're getting on the feedback riffs)
Reminds me very much of some music we made in a band called "Throckmorton and the Mung".
This is not necessarily a good thing... (the other members , Bud Skinner and Norman Meunier, have ...sunk below the radar...) Your tune would absolutely make their day...