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MarioD

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Sundown on the St. Lawrence

« on: October 17, 2015, 06:22:46 PM »

Late in the evening you're sitting on the bank of the St. Lawrence river (note input river, stream, pond, lake or ocean of your choice) in the late fall watching the last of the painted leaves slowly fall to the ground. Quickly the wind picks up, a cold front comes in, and a little snow starts to fall. Then just as quickly it stops, the sun shines and you are at peace with nature again.

This is one that JonD and I have been working on.

Let us know what you think.

Sundown on the St Lawrence.mp3 (7426.6 KB - downloaded 242 times.)
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folderol

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Re: Sundown on the St. Lawrence

« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2015, 06:38:59 PM »

Lovely moody atmospheric (very complex) piece. A bit confused in places, but nevertheless very good Roll Eyes


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elwoodblues91

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Re: Sundown on the St. Lawrence

« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2015, 07:08:57 PM »

I have to agree with Will on this one,as although there were certain areas I really liked,I didn't think it was all tied together neatly enough.Very cinematic though,which is a style I love,but I think this tune could used some re-working.