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elwoodblues1969
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« on: August 27, 2008, 06:20:07 PM »

This is a song I have been in awe of & deeply admired ever since it came out and just for fun,I decided to try & cover it.
To just enjoy listening to this song on cd is one thing,but to actually learn the compostion in great detail to cover it,is quite another experience-which really made me appreciate this song all the more....the jazzy bass lines,the various key changes and the wonderful backing vocals really make this an extraordinary piece of music and it's one of my most favorite arrangements of all time.

I spent 3 days on this song-which is more time than I have ever spent on any cover song I've ever done & I bungled it,but it certainly was fun messing it up. Tongue Grin

By the way,I am equally amazed at Gordon Sumner's metaphorical & narrative lyrics...so here they are;

Under the ruins of a walled city,crumbling towers & beams of yellow light
No flags of truce,no cries of pity
The siege guns had been pounding all through the night
It took a day to build this city,we walked through the streets in the afternoon
As I crossed the fields that I had known,I recognized the walls that I once made
Had to stop in my tracks for fear,of walking on the mines I laid

And if I built this fortress,around your heart
Encircled you in trenches & barbed wire
Then let me build a bridge,for I cannot fill the chasm
And let me set the battlements on fire

Then I went off to fight some battle,that I'd invented inside my head
Away so long for years & years-you'd probably thought or even wished that I was dead
While the armies are all sleeping,beneath the tattered flag we'd made
Had to stop in my tracks for fear,of walking on the mines I'd laid

{Repeat Chorus}

This has now become you're home,a sentence you seem prepared to pay
It took a day to build this city,we walked through the streets in the afternoon
As I returned across the lands I'd known,I recognized the fields where I once played
Had to stop in my tracks for fear,of walking on the mines I'd laid

{Repeat Chorus}

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« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 07:15:19 PM »

Being half an alien, I didn't knew this one before.

This is a cover performed with a lot of confidence.

Growing stronger and stronger here! At moments you're voice reminds me of Sting's... Oeps... I'm getting a flashback... this was Sting's song... I better close my post before I write stupid things  Undecided

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P.S.: OK, looks like I'm only a quarter alien  Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2008, 08:29:30 PM »

Hi Moon,

I suppose I should have mentioned that this is Sting's song...but instead,I used Sting's real name-just to test everyone's knowledge. Wink

I'll take your reminiscence & flashback as a compliment-thanks for the support! Cheesy

Thom
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« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2008, 09:33:19 PM »

Thom,
You will be pleased to know that Sting is from a neighbouring town to me. We are of the same age group and used to play the same clubs *in those days* before fame!
I think you have done a stellar job on this cover.
You are getting to be so good at this. I wish you would branch out with some original material. You have such an intensive way of working that I'm certain if you could just get a germ of an idea, either musically or lyrically, that you could run with it and produce a bit of your own *magic*.
Keep it up.
 Wink
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« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2008, 10:47:49 PM »

James,

I remember having seen a documentary,where there was mention of where Sting had hailed from...in an industrial area.
I can't think of any other place in time I would rather be in,than to be in England at that time,but of course,I was just a child then.
I'm really not clear on what you mean exactly-in terms of "branching out with some
original material-either musically or lyrically"?
That is to say,I have done oodles of original material musically and I've done one song with lyrics as well.
As far as doing more songs lyrically,I may have had more done beyond the one,but I was occupied with the Scottish music,obviously.

Incidentally,I have not heard from anyone from the studio in that regard-as of yet and with that,I am completely disregarding that project altogether.

The Sting song was a way to relax,re-group,have fun & to warm up my voice again..after having let it idle for a while.

Thanks for your encouragement & kind words. Cool

Ideas for further originals are germinating as I write this. Wink

Thom
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« Reply #5 on: August 27, 2008, 11:28:22 PM »

Wow Thom..you did a good job on this one!   

Great vocals and a nicely balanced mix.

Do you take requests??

Cool

Wyatt

 

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« Reply #6 on: August 28, 2008, 12:51:26 AM »

Wyatt,

It was a bit painful to belt out the vocals-as not only is it out of my range,but I have not sung in a while,so I really should have taken a couple of more days to practice,but glad you like the vocals-thanks a bunch for the compliments! Cheesy

Thom
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« Reply #7 on: August 28, 2008, 01:13:02 AM »

Wyatt,

It was a bit painful to belt out the vocals-as not only is it out of my range,but I have not sung in a while,so I really should have taken a couple of more days to practice,but glad you like the vocals-thanks a bunch for the compliments! Cheesy

Thom
..I know what it's like. I am trying to get my voice going again after nearly two years, and it is taking a while. ..heya..progress is progress.

Cool

Wyatt

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« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2008, 01:39:34 AM »

Thom, you did a fantastic job on this one.

Perfect backing track and an outstanding vocal!

I really didn’t think it was outside your range.  Great job on belting it out!
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« Reply #9 on: August 29, 2008, 03:31:54 AM »

Mario,

Thanks for the vote of confidence-much appreciated! Cheesy

Thom
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« Reply #10 on: August 29, 2008, 05:55:58 PM »

I know this song very well and I always appreciated the mood built with expressive vocals
You did a pretty good job on this one, although there's a certain difference in vocal-timbre I must congratulate for keeping the right expressivity and articulation throughout the song.
Very good

Cheers
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« Reply #11 on: August 29, 2008, 06:16:22 PM »

L.R.,

Thanks for the kind review! Cool

Thom
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« Reply #12 on: August 30, 2008, 09:47:33 AM »

The only thing I could add to all the comments already given, is that I want more  Grin Cool
And yes.... I did notice that very cool bass line  Wink


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« Reply #13 on: August 30, 2008, 12:43:59 PM »

... I always appreciated the mood built with expressive vocals... although there's a certain difference in vocal-timbre I must congratulate for keeping the right expressivity and articulation throughout the song.

An ambitious project, admirably well-executed. Any song you cover will automatically become your own due to the nature of your instrument.
Schweet!  Wink
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« Reply #14 on: August 30, 2008, 03:35:16 PM »

Kara & Oren,

Some really nice feedback from you both-thank you kindly! Cheesy

Thom
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