Thanks a lot guys
@James
I very much like what you've done here. In places I think it is a perfect fit, in others maybe not so much. What I think I'd like to do (if you're happy with the idea) is pan your guitar about half-way to one side, and fade it in and out at strategic points. Eventually I want to add some incidental harp, so this could be panned the opposite way for balance and to maintain space.
I'm wondering now if this should stay here or migrate to the review section. Would anyone else be interested in joining in?
I can't make up my mind if this needs a bass or is better without - I'm open to suggestions. Again, I'm not sure if it would benefit from very light percussion. The timing is a reasonably steady 120BPM but not perfect
Several people have suggested it would make a good song, which really had never occurred to me. I don't have any ideas at all for lyrics, and don't know what would be taken as a melody line, but as usual I'm open to any ideas. In the past, several collaborations on here have morphed in parallel directions