Wow... nice song! Great work with the vocals.
Personally, I think the mix is a bit too gently and to polite.
Don't get me wrong, you have a
great song here but I'm missing something: this song has the potential to rock and it should rock more. So... don't hold back on those guitars and bass: try to EQ the instrument tracks leaving room for the vocals, and than make them louder. Getting some (extra) reverb and compression on some tracks may give the song some more energy.
Love to hear a next version of this one !
Oh... wait a minute... this was done with an I-pad !!! Oooops... amazing !!! I'm wondering what you could do with a full featured DAW on a PC
Moon