I enjoyed this. It captures the idea very well.
but...
The strings seem much to loud, and are not the best sounding ones.
I wouldn't mind having a crack at a remix myself actually
No problem! Exactly what do you need from me and in what form?
PS - feel free to either subtract things you don't like and/or replace them with what you like. Also feel free to add anything that you would like.
Note - we have out 4th of July party coming up and I will need a lot of time dedicated to that plus we have family coming in from the states of Washington and Alabama so it may be a little while before I can get you what you need.