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« on: November 02, 2012, 11:37:36 PM » |
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Back to pure synth music for a while. This is a sort of New Age composition. As it is over 4 minutes, I'll just put up the mp3 version for now.
Of course, all comments and suggestions are welcome.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
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Oren
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« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2012, 01:01:50 AM » |
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Heathcliff out on the moors, thinking about salvation. So very COOL!
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #2 on: November 03, 2012, 01:03:45 AM » |
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Lush synth varietals,nice segways & a cinematic tour de force... tasty!  |
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« Reply #3 on: November 04, 2012, 05:55:16 PM » |
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Thank you both very much for the vote of confidence!
Today has been such unremittingly bad weather - cold with heavy squally showers - that I didn't go out at all. Instead I concentrated on this little baby.
So what have I done?
Well first I slightly extended the last phrase as I thought the ending a bit too abrupt. Then I changed the timing from 80BPM to 90BMP, as I though it tended to drag a bit (ending up with the same overall length!)
Next I took one of the lead instruments down an octave - occasional notes were quite piercing.
Then I swapped out the second 'Bubbles' lead with 'Echo Bubbles', and added some smooth sound fillers in places.
Finally, I adjusted timing, levels and stereo positions (double checking with headphones).
I think this is now as I want it, so here we have version 2.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2012, 05:56:52 PM » |
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... and for mp3ers.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #5 on: November 04, 2012, 06:08:14 PM » |
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Nice refinements and radio ready!  |
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« Reply #6 on: November 04, 2012, 10:13:17 PM » |
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Absolutely fantastic This is your best one to date  It’s a keeper |
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The older I get the better I was!
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« Reply #7 on: November 05, 2012, 05:45:11 PM » |
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I had expected to like this version less - refinements often dull the fine edge of one's initial creation... Not so, with this beauty! |
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« Reply #8 on: November 05, 2012, 07:06:33 PM » |
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Thanks everyone. I'm sitting here now with a big silly grin on my face  It is so easy to 'improve' an idea to the point of destruction and I'm glad I managed to avoid that  Thanks again  |
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