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« on: May 29, 2007, 01:03:15 AM » |
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Been in the works quite a while.
I did bass/ drums on the Juno-G. Added a strat chord part, sent it to Oren who added about 30 guitar tracks...and sent me some lyrics for it, along with some ideas.
I figured out a melody for the lyrics and culled his guitar tracks to fit, then sent it back to him for suggestions. Went back and forth a few times..then..
Kara suggested female vocals so I got my youngest to add some female vox and this is where it's at. Her vocals were added fresh tonight.
Comments/ suggestions/criticisms are welcome.
I (we) want this to be as good as we can get it..
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« Reply #1 on: May 29, 2007, 06:01:06 AM » |
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Bob, Good idea Kara came up with! Glad you were able to follow through. Your daughter's contribution gives character and life to the song (does she always sing in key like that?). My only suggestion might be to bring it up in the mix, and see if she wants to attempt some harmony parts. That little collage at the end is cool, too. I understand you have another daughter who sings? We could use the help...  Oren. |
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« Reply #2 on: May 29, 2007, 10:49:30 AM » |
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Yeah, she always sings in key- has it naturally. Not bad for a kid, eh? Must be in the genes  Glad you like it- that was important. |
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« Reply #3 on: May 29, 2007, 07:45:14 PM » |
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Those added vocals are great ! Record here a couple of times to create a choir or invite some of here friends  I repeat, a great song. Could be the next Pink Floyd  |
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« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2007, 12:54:00 AM » |
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Added a couple of her harmonies, boosted vocals overall.
Brought overall levels up.
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« Reply #5 on: May 30, 2007, 04:11:48 AM » |
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Smells good, Pilgrim. |
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« Reply #6 on: May 30, 2007, 10:31:56 AM » |
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Sounds great here |
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« Reply #7 on: May 30, 2007, 04:47:20 PM » |
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Lovin it over here.
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« Reply #8 on: May 31, 2007, 08:46:23 PM » |
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Oh no, Wyatt....we forgot the harmonica (I hear everything sounds better in Oklahoma...) |
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« Reply #9 on: May 31, 2007, 09:08:48 PM » |
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Well i could add it needs more cowbels |
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« Reply #10 on: May 31, 2007, 09:10:33 PM » |
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Oh no, Wyatt....we forgot the harmonica (I hear everything sounds better in Oklahoma...) lol..heck partner..even harmonica sounds better out here! ..and btw, the latest version is sooo perfect. Wyatt |
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« Reply #11 on: June 02, 2007, 09:09:09 PM » |
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Oh no, Wyatt....we forgot the harmonica (I hear everything sounds better in Oklahoma...) Night mood music, Excellent, I like the choice of sounds, synths have a cool vibe. The vocals makes the difference between a good song and a fine one. (In this case the latter). Very well done, no need to change anything imo, I enjoyed it Cheers |
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« Reply #12 on: June 10, 2007, 08:12:35 AM » |
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Thanks for listening!
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« Reply #13 on: July 25, 2007, 03:56:54 AM » |
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Hey Bob. Great tune. But the vox's are buried in the music a tad. Might want to expand them to make them more dominant. Other than that ... super work. Nice clarity and balance on everything else.
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« Reply #14 on: August 18, 2007, 05:27:35 PM » |
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Hey, surprise, this one downloaded for me!
Fantastic style again here. Damn, I love this stuff. Oren's guitar(s) are excellent and your daughter's vocal works very well in the mood.
You guys really get it rollin.
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