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sabotai
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Armistice (song)
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June 23, 2007, 09:29:07 PM »
Hi,
This is a song I am going to enter in the KVR contest (thats why its so short). Let me know what you think. I'm not really sure how to describe it.
0607_Leto_Armistice.mp3
(1565.88 KB - downloaded 392 times.)
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Laguna Rising
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Re: Armistice (song)
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June 24, 2007, 07:22:46 AM »
Hi Sabotai
This is a very simple track, it doesn't really take off, for me, sorry.
imo it lacks some kind of melodic content, some melody of any kind.
sounds is good, is just a matter of construction...
cheers
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sabotai
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Re: Armistice (song)
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June 24, 2007, 10:23:57 PM »
Hmm yeah I suppose I should pick something that is more focused on melody for the audience at KVR. I suppose I picked this song cause it was the easiest thing to cut down to 2 minutes. Since as you say, its pretty simple. Well I got off my butt and made a new track (the other one was 7 years old). I like it more, although its not my best work. I will admit my listening preferences are not too focused on complex melodies and that is reflected in the music I make as well. I will post this new track here even though I can't figure out how to provide a direct link to it to post at KVR. Back to the drawing board on that.
Thank you for your honest feedback!
0607_Leto_Spectre.mp3
(1796.96 KB - downloaded 303 times.)
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Re: Armistice (song)
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June 30, 2007, 05:15:01 PM »
To post a direct link at kvr or anywhere else : right click on your song in your post and choose 'copy link'. That's it, now you paste the link anywhere
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Re: Armistice (song)
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July 01, 2007, 07:09:11 PM »
Actually, there is great sound in this song, although I have to agree that I miss a strong lead to fill in a melody somewhere. I would defenitly keep on working on this one because I hear a great sound, but the work doesn't seem to be finished.
So I'm hoping for a second version here
Moon
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Laguna Rising
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Re: Armistice (song)
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July 01, 2007, 07:34:12 PM »
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I like it more, although its not my best work.
Spectre :
Much more interesting ! cool sounds, and good rhythm
Keep on
Cheers
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spirulence
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Re: Armistice (song)
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July 26, 2007, 12:11:13 AM »
Yeah, Spectre is much better. Time for me to go eat dinner.
Maybe you should try adding a little clickiness to some of the sounds?
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elwoodblues1969
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Re: Armistice (song)
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August 20, 2007, 01:15:54 AM »
Hello,
Even though this song needs more structure,it's a great beginning for a song,as you can dance it,relax to it and just zone out....I really like this quality.
Elwood
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