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« on: August 26, 2009, 05:30:04 PM » |
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Here is a new song that I have been messing around with.
Let me know what you think.
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« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2009, 06:15:38 PM » |
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Very smooth and polished performance  Is there a vocal planned for it? Although it works nicely as an instrumental, it 'feels' like there should be a voice on top of it. Hmmm, I would have thought a female one  |
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
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« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2009, 02:48:04 AM » |
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Look who's taking up where Les Paul left off!..  .Schmooth...  |
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« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2009, 06:57:00 AM » |
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Smooth & polished are the right words here Now you need Alicia to sing on top of it  k |
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MarioD
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« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2009, 12:15:29 PM » |
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Thanx all for listening: Will – I do mostly instrumentals because my voice sucks in capitol letters. However if anyone wants to adds vocal parts just let me know and I’ll upload the backing tracks, sans the leads, so you can do so. Oren – I don’t think so Kara – Who’s Alicia  Anyway if she wants to add a vocal track then see my response to Will. Thanx all for the very kind words. |
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« Reply #5 on: August 27, 2009, 01:02:35 PM » |
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Kara – Who’s Alicia Anyway if she wants to add a vocal track then see my response to Will. Alicia Keys ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L-WZG-y2e9k&feature=channel ) I was just thinking that the song would be perfect for here. Now you just have to convince here k |
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« Reply #6 on: August 28, 2009, 08:27:59 PM » |
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 Super stuff, here. I don't know about Alicia ..... but if someone wants to come up with lyrics I wouldn't mind giving this a go on vocals .... all in the name of collab experiment, of course.  James
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« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2009, 01:54:26 PM » |
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I would love to have you sing on this James.
I really suck at lyrics so I can’t help you there. However just let me know what you need backing track wise and you’ve got it.
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« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2009, 02:59:59 PM » |
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You know, your music has this way of putting my head into music video mode.. Larry Carleton and Lee Ritenour playing on the veranda of a beach house, watching the sun come out after a storm.. ..no hurries, no worries. Beautifully smooth piece. Wyatt |
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« Reply #9 on: August 29, 2009, 05:16:33 PM » |
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Lyrics ..... anyone ?? A few lines, or a theme should set me off. I'm usually pretty good at 'continuing'. James
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« Reply #10 on: August 29, 2009, 05:29:45 PM » |
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Lyrics ..... anyone ?? A few lines, or a theme should set me off. I'm usually pretty good at 'continuing'. James I've walked along this shore
Breaking waves were my friend
I couldn’t ask for more
Horizon without end
I’m glad you joined me here
No more to say or do
There is no loss, no fear
Just look, the light breaks through.
The beauty of the land
The marvel of the ocean
Just walking on the sand
Taking in the motion
I cannot see the past
Just being here with you
This moment’s sure to last
Just look, the light breaks through.There you are..take it away m8! Wyatt |
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« Reply #11 on: August 29, 2009, 07:35:47 PM » |
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Wyatt, thanx for the very kind review.
You also wrote some very good lyrics.
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« Reply #12 on: August 29, 2009, 08:31:00 PM » |
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Hey ..... thanks, brother .... I had a feeling you might have something up your sleeve OK, Mario .... we're cookin' here. Give me your BPM. Give me a breakdown of 'how you hear' the structure (as in: verse/chorus/bridge, etc) and I think we can go somewhere, my friend.  Can't wait.  James
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« Reply #13 on: August 29, 2009, 08:36:24 PM » |
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We await with 'bated breath  |
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #14 on: August 29, 2009, 09:23:22 PM » |
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 OK, First, tentative, run at this ...... and only a portion of it. Let's see if it's gonna work. James
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