Symbionic, the Man in the Machine

[Wyatt]

17 looks and no downloads on the new version..time to retire it.     

    

[kara]

Be aware, I have my bad hat on today 

Here is what I hear
Intro : Interesting and good, inovative and a good groove, allso a good buildup
0:50 - 1:00 : Hmm, you use that bass rif as a pedal bass over the chord progression, it sounds limit to me but lets see what others think
1:00-1:20 : ok we prepare the verse
1:40 : It's start going wrong... the groove of the song gets broken
From 1:45 : I'm sorry but that piano riff is completly wrong, it sounds out of time of the main groove
And IMHO it gets worse, at a certain moment I had the impression there where 2 songs playing together.

Sorry Wyat, you know I'm pretty broadminded and like a bit out of the box. But with this one I can't follow.

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[Wyatt]

Thanks for your comments Kara.

I love having the times noted like you did,
it makes it extremely precise, and very helpful.

I went back over this and like it much better now.

[folderol]

First chance I get to have a look and it's gone

[MarioD]

First chance I get to have a look and it's gone

Same here.   

I didn’t even know this existed until today!

[Oren]

First chance I get to have a look and it's gone

Same here.   

I didn’t even know this existed until today!

Me too... What the ____?

[Wyatt]

Should have gotten back to this earlier,
but yesterday was a monster. Sorries. 

This sucker needed major renovation..

..for the time being, here is version 2..

..but version 3 is a total makeover.

..it's still in the incubator..

..but it's almost ready.

You're gonna be surprised!!   

[Oren]

First-rate soundtrack material! I particularly like those two guitar chords as the music begins to fade....

[Wyatt]

First-rate soundtrack material! I particularly like those two guitar chords as the music begins to fade....

Kara nailed the bad parts for me, so this is whats left.   

Thanks for your comments, I appreciate it.

PS

Fasten your seatbelt, the next version is gonna kick.

[folderol]

Wow! You really are branching out aren't you
This is excellent.

[Wyatt]

Wow! You really are branching out aren't you
This is excellent.

Thanks Will..yes, I keep trying to stretch..

[MarioD]

One fantastic piece of music just begging for a suitable movie scene.

[Wyatt]

One fantastic piece of music just begging for a suitable movie scene.

Thanks Mario..I appreciate your comments!