...to the one who left me behind

[Zille]

Hello again.

Must...resist...the urge...to post two songs in a row. Damn...I failed. I am weak...sorry.
But that´s the last song for quite a while. I promise. Feedback and good advice would be appreciated. And before you start complaining about the drums. They sound exactly the way I wanted them to. That´s the only aspect of the song I am not willing to change.

This track is called "Constant Rain" and is a song about loss and how some people can manage to deal with it. It´s not an uber-party song but this is as close to indie-pop as I can get.

~~~ Zille - Constant Rain ~~~

I put my knowledge-trash inside
My garbage-can-like brain
And burn it down
Sparks
Flicker in the dark
Nothing can fill my heart
Back up again

And I´m in
For some constant rain
I´m prepared, I´ve got my yellow coat at hand
I can stand all this constant rain
And if
Some day all of this is going to stop
And my clothes are freed from all the mud
And everything dried up
I already forgot
About this constant rain

I browse through all of the remains
Put myself in your place
With no result
Lies
Keep circling in my mind
As I try to find
The “happy” end
Sparks
Flicker in the dark
Nothing can fill my heart
Back up again

And I´m in
For some constant rain
I´m prepared, I´ve got my yellow coat at hand
I can stand all this constant rain
And if
Some day all of this is going to stop
And my clothes are freed from all the mud
And everything dried up
I already forgot
About this constant rain

Thanks for listening (once again)
See ya!
Daniel

[Oren]

Daniel,

Other than the drums, this is a cool tune....
Actually, I like the percussion, and the imaginative use of the other instruments.
 A trippy little song, nicely composed, produced, and performed

Oren.

[kara]

I don't have anything against the drums, it fits the song 
Perhaps a good bass track that goes with it would give it a bit more body ?

I enjoyed the song, good lyrics, and I'm happy to see that we have a member more that sings, and sings good 
You better prepare yourself for some collab requests 

k

[SoundKlops]

Hi Daniel,

somehow strangely however well.

Andreas

[Wyatt]

Daniel,

This is easy to enjoy..great song, interesting production, and I love the lyrics.

I'm glad you showed up around here.   



Wyatt

[folderol]

Very enjoyable song. The percussion is a bit strange but it perfectly fits. I agree with Rony, that this would benefit from a bass line.

[Zille]

Hi.

Yes, I admit. I have major bass-problems caused by the fact that I do not own a bass. That makes me use sythetic basses and I really do not like the sound of them too much. When the time comes and I finally earn some money I will buy myself propper recording-equipment and a bass-guitar. I promise. Until then my songs will be pretty much bass-less.

@ Kara

Thank you for the compliment...but I do NOT have a good voice by any stretch of imagination. I wouldn´t want to ruin other peoples songs with my shaky performance. I would be honored if somebody really wants me to...but I don´t think this will happen anytime soon.

[Martin E]

As I remember there was always something unusual in your songs and this time the drums take the biscuit. Honestly it doesn't work for me the whole song through.
I like the song and the lyrics though.

[MarioD]

I like this.  Very good percussion, vox and mix. However I did not like the abrupt ending.  The song just stopped!

I have major bass-problems caused by the fact that I do not own a bass. That makes me use sythetic basses and I really do not like the sound of them too much.

You could always ask forums members to add bass lines.  Collaborations happen a lot around here.

...but I do NOT have a good voice by any stretch of imagination. I wouldn´t want to ruin other peoples songs with my shaky performance. I would be honored if somebody really wants me to...but I don´t think this will happen anytime soon.

You DO have a good voice and I’m sure you will be asked soon.