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Title: Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now Post by: UMEU on December 20, 2009, 11:15:29 AM Hello
Just wanted to share with the rest of you a link to a music i'm working now and maybe receive some valuable feedback and suggestions for improvement. It has a sort of non-western sound (explores double harmonic scale) and it's a non finalized version. Hope you like it. Cheers and thanks for listening. UMEU http://soundcloud.com/umeu/w-i-p-008-06-12-09-01-export-19-12-09 Title: Re: Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now Post by: kara on December 20, 2009, 01:39:04 PM Sounds good, gives a dark oriental taste. Something you don't hear often.
In the second part it needs some variations and/or some counter melodies to keep the interest of the listener. k Title: Re: Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now Post by: folderol on December 20, 2009, 02:13:48 PM Very impressive work. Gives a very eirie atmosphere. However, I agree with Rpony that it could do with more development.
Title: Re: Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now Post by: UMEU on December 20, 2009, 02:28:51 PM Thanks very much for listening :)
It's indeed in an early stage. However i'll consider the observations made as I agree with them. Title: Re: Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now Post by: MarioD on December 20, 2009, 02:41:18 PM you have a great start here :-
Sounds good, gives a dark oriental taste. Something you don't hear often. In the second part it needs some variations and/or some counter melodies to keep the interest of the listener. k I also agree with Ronny. Title: Re: Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now Post by: Oren on December 20, 2009, 07:32:36 PM you have a great start here :- If this track is aimed at the dance/trance listeners, your "lack" of variation may be just what the mood needs. Well done! Title: Re: Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now Post by: UMEU on January 08, 2010, 08:46:47 AM Hi there and happy new year for all of you.
Here is a "final" version of the thing. Did i get "lost" somewhere ? ;) Cheers UMEU http://soundcloud.com/umeu/lost Title: Re: Sharing a preview of what i'm working right now Post by: kara on January 08, 2010, 09:04:26 AM And happy new year to you
No, you dind't get lost, good sound layers in the second part that keeps the listeners attention 8) Despite that it is pretty short (3min) for a trance track I think it's the perfect length. Good work k |