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retrononomusic
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« on: June 23, 2014, 08:22:42 PM »

This one is done with a full software on mac and real instruments (not the piano).

I worked really hard on it since I'm alone. I know it's missing something maybe you can tell me...
I like to play with balance of the instruments in the mix so it sounds a lot better with headphones.
Again the lyrics are really important to me since it's not my natural language, so if you hear something unusual...

http://youtu.be/TM9epImIbTs

Two topics in a row, I hope it's OK. The last for today I promise. ;-)

Thanks again.

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« Reply #1 on: June 24, 2014, 08:24:25 AM »

This is actually more rounded than your previous one. A gentle, easy listening song.

I wouldn't be too concerned about language idiosyncrasies - most songs stretch the language anyway!
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« Reply #2 on: June 24, 2014, 06:41:55 PM »

I agree with folderol.

Again the mixing of the vocal is very well done. I liked the style of the drums too.

You really got your own style defined.

Perhaps an idea (not meant as critisme): not many of us are singers meaning we would never reach your level of vocal performance. But why not using some pitch correction on the vocals? This would bring your songs to a professional level. 

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« Reply #3 on: June 24, 2014, 07:30:03 PM »

Does it mean that I am sometimes out of tune in the song? This is something I can work on. Is it all the time or just moments in the song?
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« Reply #4 on: June 25, 2014, 08:25:55 PM »

Is it all the time or just moments in the song?

Only moments  Wink
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« Reply #5 on: June 25, 2014, 09:44:09 PM »

Another good one!

No problem with the vocals - sounds like a French-speaking person singing in English. We have that in Canada all the time... Grin
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« Reply #6 on: June 27, 2014, 06:08:36 PM »

Thank you again for your comments.

Now the song has a video http://youtu.be/xWjYDcKjBwY )
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« Reply #7 on: June 27, 2014, 07:22:57 PM »

Inventive and entertaining. The video content suits the music very well, and adds ideas and content to the theme. This creation is actually better as a video presentation...
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« Reply #8 on: June 27, 2014, 09:44:26 PM »

Wot Him Sed Smiley
Excellent vid. Fits the song perfectly.

P.S.
How much did the cat charge for the 'guest' appearance?  Grin
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« Reply #9 on: June 29, 2014, 07:11:05 PM »

Wot Him Sed Smiley
Excellent vid. Fits the song perfectly.

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How much did the cat charge for the 'guest' appearance?  Grin
Actually the cat already owe me 5 years of love and care, we can call it even! )

PS: What does "Wot Him Sed" mean? ^^
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« Reply #10 on: July 03, 2014, 03:25:36 PM »

This sounds great to me!

Keep them coming!
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« Reply #11 on: July 03, 2014, 09:30:00 PM »

Wot Him Sed Smiley
Excellent vid. Fits the song perfectly.

P.S.
How much did the cat charge for the 'guest' appearance?  Grin
Actually the cat already owe me 5 years of love and care, we can call it even! )

PS: What does "Wot Him Sed" mean? ^^

Sort of trash speaking for "What he said" Cheesy
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