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Title: another little live demo Post by: Frederik on June 14, 2007, 08:02:59 PM I just made this other live demo (for the group I play in).
Just me playing guitar and bass, and then some singing on top. As always: It's just a few take thingy, I'm not a great singer (I'm just trying to give an idea on the melody) and the lyrics are not more then a sketch. But nevertheless: do you think this song has potential (I was pleased with the guitar riff quite OK)? all thoughts, comments and suggestions welcome. bye, Frederik Title: Re: another little live demo Post by: Laguna Rising on June 14, 2007, 08:35:43 PM Hi Frederik
apart from your playing ability, which is good, I think there are good melodies, and song structure is ok, meaningful evolution, I'm not 100 % convinced with the vocals, I think they could better fit the rhythm and mood in some way... I don't know exactly how... small details anyway If I can figure out something more I'll tell you :-[ Cheers Title: Re: another little live demo Post by: Frederik on June 14, 2007, 09:38:40 PM thanks laguna, guess you're right about the vocal thing... I'm thinking of redoing those altogether - or maybe I'll let our real singer search something ;)
bye, frederik Title: Re: another little live demo Post by: kara on June 16, 2007, 08:06:43 AM Interesting combination of good guitar playing & an interesting voice.
With songs like that I allways have a hard time to decide to what to listen, the instrument or the voice. A shame the recording quality isn't better k Title: Re: another little live demo Post by: Wyatt on June 18, 2007, 10:58:56 AM Frederik,
I think the guitar licks in this are perfectly wonderful.. Wyatt |