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Author Topic: New Song - When I Think About You  (Read 7660 times)
stephenwyoung
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« on: May 30, 2011, 02:49:47 PM »

Hi everyone,

I just wrote this one yesterday, called When I Think About You.  Most of the instrumentation is BIAB (I played a little organ and percussion).  I hope you enjoy it.  Please let me know what you think.

Here are the lyrics...

WHEN I THINK ABOUT YOU
WORDS AND MUSIC, COPYRIGHT STEPHEN W. YOUNG

WHEN I THINK ABOUT YOU
MY HEART STARTS RACING AND IT WON'T STOP
IT FEELS SO GOOD
IT HAPPENS ALL THE TIME
NOW MY HEART IS ON FIRE
IT'S HOTTER THAN A SUMMER TIME BLACKTOP
I KEEP THINKING 'BOUT YOU
YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND

AND WHEN I THINK ABOUT YOU
I CAN'T HELP IT
'CAUSE EVERYTHING YOU DO
JUST MAKES ME WANT TO THINK ABOUT YOU

WHEN I THINK ABOUT ALL
THE THINGS WE'VE DONE TOGETHER
WHEN I THINK ABOUT ALL
THE GOOD TIMES WE HAVE SEEN
I REMEMBER THE DAY
WE SAID THIS IS FOREVER
I REMEMBER THE DAY
I KNEW THAT YOU WERE MINE

AND WHEN I THINK ABOUT YOU
I CAN'T HELP IT
'CAUSE EVERYTHING YOU DO
JUST MAKES ME WANT TO THINK ABOUT YOU

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Okay guys, somebody else needs to post a new one on here.  I don't want to be lonely. Smiley

Hope you all have a great day!

Steve

* When I Think About You.mp3 (4143.89 KB - downloaded 289 times.)
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« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2011, 05:54:39 PM »

 wOO    wOO  BRAVO, superbe!
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« Reply #2 on: May 30, 2011, 07:42:37 PM »

Hey, this rocks !

For a moment I thought Dire Straits was back. Guess this is a great complement !

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« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2011, 08:49:20 PM »

Agree with the Dire Straits comparison Smiley

Great bright and happy song.

P.S.
I happen to know there are some more new tunes in the pipeline Wink
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« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2011, 09:11:48 PM »

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Hey Steve ...

Brilliant song, again.

this could be the one to start that experiment  Cool

If you are up for it Huh

You send me vocal/organ/drums ... let me do the rest ... just for fun  wOO

How's about it?

(we like to do things like this around here)
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« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2011, 03:41:41 AM »

Azell, thank you so much!

Hi Moon.  A great compliment, indeed!  I loved Dire Straits!  Thanks so much!

Folderol, thanks very much for your time and comments!

James, thanks again!  I would love to see what you can do with it.  How would you want the vocal/organ/drums?  In one stereo mix? Or in separate wav files for each part?  Never done this like this before.

Thanks again, and hope you are all having a great day!

Steve
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« Reply #6 on: May 31, 2011, 08:43:54 AM »

Steve
PM sent.

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« Reply #7 on: May 31, 2011, 08:43:06 PM »

Awesome track, yet again. You've got a really great voice! Only thing I would remark is that the reverb on the vocals doesn't gel with the rest of the track. Could you try one with less reverb and maybe a plate style reverb? I really like your arrangement and the vocal harmonies, top notch!
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« Reply #8 on: June 01, 2011, 01:15:12 AM »

Hi Marc,

Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and comment!  I truly do appreciate your thoughts.  I'm pretty satisfied with the reverb on my voice, but I will play around with your suggestion and see if it makes a positive change.  (Not saying you're wrong, or I'm right.)  But who knows, I may follow your suggestion, and wonder why I didn't hear it that way at first! Smiley  I also need to listen on several more systems.  You may be hearing something that I haven't heard yet.

Again, your thoughts are valuable to me!

Steve
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« Reply #9 on: June 04, 2011, 12:02:59 AM »

Steve, it’s all been said!

Super song, great vocals, perfect instrumentation, great arrangement and an outstanding mix

Two thumbs up
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« Reply #10 on: June 04, 2011, 05:25:19 PM »

Super song, great vocals, perfect instrumentation, great arrangement and an outstanding mix
Razor sharp! wOO
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