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« on: July 05, 2011, 02:35:42 AM » |
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Hi all,
After taking off for a month, I have written a new one today, called In Between The Rhythm And The Rhyme. All the instrumentation is RealTracks/RealDrums, except a smidgen of strings and organ that I played. I hope you enjoy it!
Here is the RT/RD info...
RealTracks in song: :Bass, Electric, NorthernRockBallad Ev 065
RealTracks in song: :Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm PopUpliftPulsing Ev16 120
RealTracks in song: :Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 120
RealTracks in song: :Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Syncopated Sugar Ev 102
RealTracks in song: :Guitar, Electric, Rhythm RockBritSoulful Ev 085
RealTracks in song: :Guitar, Electric, Soloist CountryWaltzBrent Sw 085
RealDrums in Song: SmoothJazzBallad^4-XStHHt,SnrHHt
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And here are the lyrics...
In Between The Rhythm And The Rhyme
Copyright Stephen W. Young
There's a little girl making eyes at me
She's wanting my attention
Wanting me to see what she can do
Yesterday when she waa two
On a Saturday at the football field
A pretty girl is cheering
And every now and then her team will win
Yesterday when she was ten
In between the rhythm and the rhyme
There's so much more to life if you just take the time
I wouldn't trade for all the things that you can find
In between the rhythm and the rhyme
A young man smiles nervously at me
He's wanting my permission
To take away my pretty little girl
And turn around my whole world
In between the rhythm and the rhyme
There's so much more to life if you just take the time
I wouldn't trade for all the things that you can find
In between the rhythm and the rhyme
(Repeat Chorus)
A little girl is making eyes at me
She's wanting my attention
Wanting me to see what she can do
I can't believe she's almost two
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Have a great day!!!
Steve
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Oren
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« Reply #1 on: July 05, 2011, 06:29:26 AM » |
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I'm hearing Lonnie Melvin Tillis, here. Classic country, served up with style...  |
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folderol
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« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2011, 05:58:01 PM » |
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Thank you for this. A song with such a true story. I really enjoyed it.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
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MarioD
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« Reply #3 on: July 05, 2011, 09:00:07 PM » |
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Steve, you have outdone yourself on this one. You are one great lyricist  Everything is absolutely perfect! Two thumbs up! |
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The older I get the better I was!
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stephenwyoung
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« Reply #4 on: July 06, 2011, 05:24:10 PM » |
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Oren, I apre... apre... apre..., Thanks!  Never really thought about Mr. Tillis, but now that you mention it, it does kinda come out his style of country. I never really sit down to purposely write a particular genre. But I guess hailing from Texas, a little country just kind of oozes out of me! Thanks so much for your kind words! Steve |
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stephenwyoung
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« Reply #5 on: July 06, 2011, 05:30:13 PM » |
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folerol,
Thanks so much for your time and very nice words! So glad you enjoyed it!
Mario,
Thanks again, my friend! Glad you like it. Always appreciate your comments!
Hope you all have a blessed day!
Steve
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« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2011, 09:50:15 AM » |
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Steve, It's all been said. Terrific song, brother.  I think this RealTracks could put us guys out of business   James |
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Azell
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« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2011, 04:46:45 PM » |
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magnifique, rien à dire, sauf BRAVO. Venez-vous de marier votre fille  Very, very beautiful, nothing to say except BRAVO. Do You come to marry your daughter Azell |
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Kara pour toujours
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stephenwyoung
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« Reply #8 on: July 10, 2011, 07:07:28 PM » |
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James, Thanks so much! Glad you like it, my friend! Yep, RealTracks could put us out of business. Kinda like the computer did, and all the machines did! Thanks again! Steve |
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stephenwyoung
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« Reply #9 on: July 10, 2011, 07:11:27 PM » |
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Hi Azell, Thanks so much for your very kind words! You are so sweet. I think I may have lost something in the translation on your question. If you are asking if I let my daughter get married, yes. She married a wonderful man, and she now has 3 beautiful children. Her youngest is a little girl, almost 2 years old. So the song is really based on truth. Thanks again! Steve |
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