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Author Topic: New Song - Stay Right Here With You  (Read 5964 times)
stephenwyoung
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« on: October 01, 2011, 05:25:41 AM »

Hi all,

I have been overwhelmed with work that past few weeks so I am just now getting around to writing another new one.  I hope you enjoy it.  All the instruments are Band In A Box Realtracks and Realdrums, with just a little bit of strings and brass from my keyboard.  All the vocals are me (cheap labor again).

(I don't know how to add tags to my mp3 files on my Mac, so sorry about that!  If someone can tell me how, I will be glad to.)

Here are the lyrics...

Stay Right Here With You

Copyright Stephen W. Young

Pictures in my mind
Like an old song I can hear
The words, I've forgotten
But the memories are there
When I look at you I can see so clearly
The things I need to know
And there's nothing I'd rather do
Than just stay right here with you

So I'll take my cup of life
And drink it till I'm full
And if you think I've forgotten
Or yielded to the pull
Just look at me and smile the way you do
You'll see that it's true
That there's nothing I'd rather do
Than just stay right here with you

There's nothing I'd rather do
Than just stay right here with you

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Have a great day!

Steve

* Stay Right Here With You.mp3 (5208.49 KB - downloaded 267 times.)
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Azell
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« Reply #1 on: October 01, 2011, 08:05:37 AM »

vraiment superbe, je suis sous le charme

really beautiful, I'm in love with

Azell
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MarioD
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« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2011, 08:34:49 PM »

Absolutely perfect  wOO wOO

Great lyrics, vocals and harmonies.  Super arrangement also.

Two thumbs up
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« Reply #3 on: October 02, 2011, 08:55:16 PM »

Absolutely perfect  wOO wOO

Great lyrics, vocals and harmonies.  Super arrangement also.

Two thumbs up
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Oren
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« Reply #4 on: October 03, 2011, 08:04:48 AM »

Big, bold, outrageous cross-over country! Kiss

Lush audio, happy lyrics, ...and that vocal performance - there just aren't words...
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stephenwyoung
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« Reply #5 on: October 03, 2011, 11:38:42 PM »

Azell,

Thank you so much.  I am glad you like the song!

Mario,

Once again, thank you, my friend!  Very much appreciated.

Folderol,

I truly appreciate your time and comments!

Oren,

Thank you very much!  I am very flattered by your kind words!

Hope you all have a great day!

Steve
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« Reply #6 on: October 11, 2011, 02:06:27 PM »

 Shocked
Steve,

you truly are a special songwriter, my friend.

This is yet another masterpiece.
Beautifully written and performed to perfection.  wOO


 Wink
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stephenwyoung
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« Reply #7 on: October 14, 2011, 10:35:27 PM »

James,

Thanks so much for your kindness!  Really appreciate it!

Steve
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