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Author Topic: New Song - I Close My Eyes  (Read 5552 times)
stephenwyoung
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« on: April 22, 2012, 10:37:18 PM »

Hi all,

Just wrote another one yesterday, called I Close My Eyes.  This one is all RealTracks/RealDrums, with a smattering of midi strings/orchestration (Miroslav Philharmonik) and the tremolo guitar is a clean midi guitar sound with a lot of plugin effects.  All the vocals are me.  I hope you enjoy it!

Here are the lyrics...

I Close My Eyes
Music & Lyrics Copyright Stephen W. Young

It's late in the evening
Another day's done
And I pause in reflection
Of battles we've won
And good things received
That I never earned
I close my eyes

And think about
The things I've learned

I've never seen the wind that blows
The clouds around
At times I hear your voice so clear
Without a sound

So it's on to tomorrow
And the plans we've drawn
And away with the sorrow
Of yesterdays gone

I've never seen the wind that blows
The clouds around
And I can hear your voice so clear
Without a sound

I've never seen the wind that blows
The clouds around
And I can hear your voice so clear
Without a sound

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Have a great day!    Smiley

Steve

* I Close My Eyes.mp3 (6025.23 KB - downloaded 268 times.)
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Oren
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« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2012, 06:07:22 AM »

Big, very big... wOO
Expansive, spacious, lots of room to experience the nuances.
Unquestionably your best - lyrically, musically, and performance-wise.
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« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2012, 06:22:30 PM »

Got to agree with Oren here. A really beautiful song Afro
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« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2012, 08:52:36 PM »

SUPERBE comme d'habitude  Wink
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« Reply #4 on: April 26, 2012, 09:39:27 PM »

Oren,

Thanks very much for your time and input!  Glad you like this one.

Folderol,

Thank you very much!

Azell,

Once again, thank you for your kind words!

Steve
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« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2012, 02:52:42 PM »

I agree with Oren also.

I really like your lyrics on this one.

Great mix also.

Two thumbs up.
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« Reply #6 on: April 30, 2012, 04:02:25 PM »

Mario,

Once again, thanks very much for your kind words!  Much appreciated.

Steve
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