Maybe it's just the way music is created these days ... but it sounds like it's all about the background/chords and not the melody.
If I were doing this, I'd put the melody parts out front more. And, like foldero said, the horn sounds are "dull".
And, while I'm going on and on ... I would suggest that you stick with a limited number of melody voicings. I find it jumps back and forth between various horn and strings sounds a bit too much. More like a synth ad than a lovely piece of music.
But, I do have to say "WELL DONE". It's a nice piece and easy to listen to. Thanks for sharing.
Thanx bvdp for those insites. After listening again after reading this I think you are correct on all accounts. I never thought about the "synth add" remark but you are right.
Thanx for bring these to my attention as I will work on them in future songs.