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Title: A Departure
Post by: shrikant on December 30, 2013, 10:04:41 AM
A Departure,is the name of the new track I made. Would love to have your response.
Thanks,
shrikant


Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: folderol on December 30, 2013, 10:30:41 PM
Well! This is very different from anything I've heard from you before. Overall I like it, but find the percussion fights the rest.


Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: shrikant on December 31, 2013, 03:26:58 PM
Well! This is very different from anything I've heard from you before. Overall I like it, but find the percussion fights the rest.

Thanks,folderol. ;D
All these days I have been guided,advised by friends over here and at kvr. Thanks for the observation. I too felt the percussion was bit loud.But did not have a better idea.
Thanks once again.
Happy New Year
shrikant


Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: MarioD on January 01, 2014, 11:04:16 PM
Yes this is very different!

FWIW-I would drop the drums completely.  I do not think this one needs drums, especially those drums.  IMHO this would be an outstanding piece of music but the drums really detracted me.




Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: shrikant on January 02, 2014, 09:19:00 AM
Yes this is very different!

FWIW-I would drop the drums completely.  I do not think this one needs drums, especially those drums.  IMHO this would be an outstanding piece of music but the drums really detracted me.

Mario D thanks for the suggestion.
While I was in the process of building this track an affable public figure passed away.I added drums to the track and named it A departure and posted it at relevant places without naming the person directly.Since it was not meant for him in the first place, I left out details. Probably due to the sad situation many people liked it and I too overlooked my own reservations about it.  Now I have removed the drum track and replaced the file here.I feel it sounds better now.Thanks for the observation.


Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: MarioD on January 02, 2014, 07:18:24 PM
This is much better.

It is now outstanding  :;


Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: folderol on January 02, 2014, 09:27:34 PM
Agree. This works much better now.


Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: shrikant on January 03, 2014, 01:40:04 AM
This is much better.

It is now outstanding  :;

Happy that it sounds better now. :)
Thanks Mario and folderol for the valuable input.

Thanks once again. :)
shrikant


Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: Oren on January 07, 2014, 08:44:57 AM
Lush, emotive... :-
(and very good without the percussion :-*)


Title: Re: A Departure
Post by: shrikant on January 07, 2014, 12:25:10 PM
Lush, emotive... :-
(and very good without the percussion :-*)

Thanks Oren. :)