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Title: Other shore - new 'acoustic' track with vocals Post by: Frederik on July 30, 2008, 08:00:54 AM After my (failed) electro experiment another acoustic based track.
It starts of pretty slow (the real refrain only comes after the second verse), but is has a nanana-singalong part towards the end to make things up ;) All comments and suggestions appreciated as always! frederik Title: Re: Other shore - new 'acoustic' track with vocals Post by: folderol on July 30, 2008, 07:56:47 PM Keeper O0
Nice laid back song, plenty of expression and some excellent vocal harmonies. Title: Re: Other shore - new 'acoustic' track with vocals Post by: Frederik on July 31, 2008, 06:48:26 AM Thanks Folderol,
glad you like it! frederik Title: Re: Other shore - new 'acoustic' track with vocals Post by: MarioD on July 31, 2008, 07:17:36 PM Frederick, this is a very good song. Super lyrics and a very interesting backing track.
If I could make one suggestion it would be to change the ending. I would delete the drums at the very end and end with the chord ringing out. BUT that is nitpicking for sure. It’s a keeper. Title: Re: Other shore - new 'acoustic' track with vocals Post by: offthewall on July 31, 2008, 09:19:22 PM ;D
This is a very, very, very good song! The vocals, and harmonies, are so good that they (IMHO) could do with a little *lift* in some way, maybe with some panning. I would also like to hear some EQ tweaks to bring out the acoustic guitar a bit. I think that would help to carry the vocal along. Have you tried *Classic Compressor by Kjaerhus Audio* on *acoustic* preset? This would bring out that crispness that, to my ears, is missing. ;) James Title: Re: Other shore - new 'acoustic' track with vocals Post by: Laguna Rising on August 01, 2008, 06:51:11 PM Great song ! there are west-coast vibrations in it
I like it very much, excellent melodies and vocals Cheers Title: Re: Other shore - new 'acoustic' track with vocals Post by: Frederik on August 11, 2008, 06:40:54 PM Thanks for the kind words!
The guitar lacks crispness? - if I only wouldn't be to lazy to change the strings every now and thenthat would never happen West coast vibrations - well in fact I do live at the west coast (albeit of Europe) ;D frederik Title: Re: Other shore - new 'acoustic' track with vocals Post by: Wyatt on August 11, 2008, 08:17:52 PM The guitar lacks crispness? - if I only wouldn't be to lazy to change the strings every now and then that would never happen I always change strings when they break. ;) Quote West coast vibrations - well in fact I do live at the west coast (albeit of Europe) ;D That explains it! ..nice work. 8) Wyatt |