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Title: My New Song Post by: MarioD on January 24, 2010, 01:41:23 AM Another Friday night with nothing to do, but now that both of my hands are heeled enough to play again (that is another story) I thought I would try to play what ever came to mind.
So here is my latest quick and dirty song called “My New Song”! Now how original is that ;) I hope you enjoy it and will comment on it. Constructive criticism is welcomed. Title: Re: My New Song Post by: elwoodblues1969 on January 24, 2010, 04:08:05 AM Mario,
The chord progressions & bass line are interesting enough-but to my ears,the other melodies are running very wild & need to be tamed & re-worked a bit. The song is overly saturated with reverb effects & I think you could back off on the reverb on a couple of tracks. There is some clear & present distortion also,so I think reducing the volume on the guitar tracks & even more so on the lead sounds would eleviate this problem. -Thom Title: Re: My New Song Post by: Oren on January 24, 2010, 04:08:53 AM So here is my latest quick and dirty song called “My New Song”! Now how original is that ;) Cool tune, nice mix, nice choice of instrument sounds! If I were king of the world, I'd adjust the rhythm guitar tone to remove some of the upper-mid frequencies. It sounds a little harsh and "jangly" to my ears. Smooth playing, however - I know how difficult a strummed electric guitar can be to get a cohesive performance. Now where did I put those thumbs... :D Title: Re: My New Song Post by: Wyatt on January 24, 2010, 06:26:50 AM So here is my latest quick and dirty song called “My New Song”! Now how original is that ;) Cool tune, nice mix, nice choice of instrument sounds! If I were king of the world, I'd adjust the rhythm guitar tone to remove some of the upper-mid frequencies. It sounds a little harsh and "jangly" to my ears. Smooth playing, however - I know how difficult a strummed electric guitar can be to get a cohesive performance. Now where did I put those thumbs... :D +1 Hey welcome back, Mario!! (http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n31/KiloBravoPapa/BWBW0066.jpg)(http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n31/KiloBravoPapa/BWBW0066.jpg)(http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n31/KiloBravoPapa/BWBW0066.jpg) Title: Re: My New Song Post by: Oren on January 24, 2010, 06:43:49 AM :; Title: Re: My New Song Post by: folderol on January 28, 2010, 07:54:26 PM Hey. I nearly missed this :o
Good to hear you back in action again :; Title: Re: My New Song Post by: MarioD on January 28, 2010, 09:06:12 PM Thanx all for listening and the very good comments. When time permits I’ll try these suggestions.
Title: Re: My New Song Post by: kara on January 31, 2010, 10:06:38 AM Good to hear you can play again 8)
Good song, i like it as it is k |