Yes this is very different!
FWIW-I would drop the drums completely. I do not think this one needs drums, especially those drums. IMHO this would be an outstanding piece of music but the drums really detracted me.
Mario D thanks for the suggestion.
While I was in the process of building this track an affable public figure passed away.I added drums to the track and named it A departure and posted it at relevant places without naming the person directly.Since it was not meant for him in the first place, I left out details. Probably due to the sad situation many people liked it and I too overlooked my own reservations about it. Now I have removed the drum track and replaced the file here.I feel it sounds better now.Thanks for the observation.