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« on: August 02, 2009, 05:51:53 PM » |
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Dream, my latest contribution to the forums. Basically it is a New Age guitar rambling.
I hope you like it.
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« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2009, 07:01:53 PM » |
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Absolutely first class chill-out track. Simple, but complete. It just doesn't need anything more   It went into my 'keep' folder so fast it left burn marks on the edges  |
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2009, 07:44:52 PM » |
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« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2009, 10:10:59 PM » |
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Will and Wyatt – thank you very much for the great reviews. It always astonishes me that musicians of your caliper like my stuff. You’ve made my day.
Thank you very much!
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« Reply #4 on: August 03, 2009, 12:59:45 AM » |
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Mario, There are some really pretty chord changes in this song...very dramatic...really enjoyed it! 8)As I was listening to this,I was imagining heavy & fuller bass notes to accentuate the drama of the chords changes. I was also thinking-that in some segment of this song,that you could take a break from the guitar soloing & add small guitar chords with a slow attack...rather than it one large guitar solo throughout the song. Just sharing with you,what I heard in my head as I was listening to your tune,is all. It's really nice to hear you progress from doing mostly cover songs and making the transition to becoming an accomplished composer of original works. -Thom |
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« Reply #5 on: August 03, 2009, 01:03:07 PM » |
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Hi Thom, thanx for the kind remarks.
You have some good ideas here for me. Originally I did have a heavier bass line but I thought it muddied up the mix too much. I probably had the wrong patch. I also tried playing my bass here. I came to the same conclusion; leave it as is.
I never thought about playing small guitar chords though. I may try that. I did try adding a violin section lead but I didn’t like the way it flowed. Probably just my inexperience with string sections that held me back. I also tried a couple of synth leads but again I couldn’t get it just right. Finally I said just post it as is, I’m tired of playing with it.
Thanx for the “accomplished composer” accolade. I’m not there yet but I’m working on it. I still plan on doing covers as I enjoy that also.
Thanx again Thom.
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« Reply #6 on: August 03, 2009, 05:25:31 PM » |
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... you could get stuck in a luscious loop for a really, really long time!!...
Smooth, Mr. D.  Backing tracks and guitar action well conceived and nicely deployed. |
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« Reply #7 on: August 04, 2009, 02:02:50 PM » |
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... you could get stuck in a luscious loop for a really, really long time!!...
Smooth, Mr. D. Backing tracks and guitar action well conceived and nicely deployed. Thank you very much Oren. |
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« Reply #8 on: August 05, 2009, 01:53:49 PM » |
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Smooth is the right word here I love it, could listen to this the whole day. k |
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« Reply #9 on: August 06, 2009, 12:31:36 AM » |
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Thank you Kara.
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« Reply #10 on: August 11, 2009, 09:24:23 PM » |
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First Class as always Mario.
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« Reply #11 on: August 15, 2009, 08:30:55 PM » |
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Sorry, Mario I almost missed this one. This is very sweet. It reminds me so much of my 'local hero' (from the same neighbourhood as me), the great M.K. ..........and that is a real compliment, my friend.   James
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« Reply #12 on: August 15, 2009, 09:46:01 PM » |
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Toucher and James, thank you very for listening and the extremely kind words of encouragement.
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« Reply #13 on: September 26, 2009, 08:57:45 AM » |
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Hi Mario, When I heard your music I imagined that I lie on a greenfield site. In the sky, flying horses passed by. In the distance I saw dancing elves. Slowly I began to float. Now, the elves moved in my direction. My body temperature went up slowly.  Then, unfortunately, my wife calls from the kitchen: FOOD IS READY!!  I think I'll hear the song again if my wife is not at home. Andreas |
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« Reply #14 on: September 26, 2009, 07:05:58 PM » |
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This beautifull music sounds like real...dream
Kuguar
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