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Timothee
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new song needs feedback!!!
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July 31, 2011, 10:56:24 PM »
This is a new song of mine called The long way around...I wasn't sure wether to put it under the trance catagory or under from the shadows, so I put it here instead where it lurks label-free... It is a bit trancy though, but not commercial trance at all, more house-based than anything with a progressive movement... anyway I would like some feedback on it if you have a minute because its sort of a new style i've stumbled apon and I would like to branch out as much as possible with it, so anyways, here it is...
http://soundcloud.com/tim-billstrom/the-long-way-around
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elwoodblues1969
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Re: new song needs feedback!!!
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August 01, 2011, 04:35:16 PM »
I thought the 2 minute intro was a bit much in length,with just the one arpeggio & drums,but beyond that,the tune got very interesting.
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Re: new song needs feedback!!!
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Quote from: elwoodblues1969 on August 01, 2011, 04:35:16 PM
I thought the 2 minute intro was a bit much in length,with just the one arpeggio & drums,but beyond that,the tune got very interesting.
What Thom said.
Good song, good sounds.
If you want to develop it a bit, shorten that intro, and expand on some of musical ideas you introduce in the second half of the tune.
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Timothee
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August 02, 2011, 03:07:54 AM »
Hey thanks for the advice I'll consider it, although the intro is like that to make sure the listener gets a good fill of that fantastic percussion mix, and as you probably know, a lot of dance music is very repetitive and in a lot of cases, it just drags on for a while, to give people time to dance, naturally..
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Re: new song needs feedback!!!
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August 02, 2011, 05:34:27 PM »
As a dance track I can see it would work well having that
looooong
intro, but it doesn't work so well as a 'listening' track. How about some subtle variations that wouldn't be noticed by the ravers but would give the rest of us something more to bite on?
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Timothee
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August 02, 2011, 09:20:06 PM »
You guys are right, and ive been a bit harsh on your views, so i apologise...after listening to it a few hundred more times, i have come to find the intro a bit too stretched out as well...It would be a good thing for dancing, but a track designed for listening is also important... I dont know if I will re-edit this one just yet though as I have a ton of projects Im focused on right now, but maybe next month or something... Anyways thanks for the feedback guys, as always it opens my eyes to subtle details I overlook during production...
Also i realize this isnt really a kara-moon style and I appreciate you all going out of your way to offer me critique..
Cheers !
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Azell
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August 11, 2011, 08:19:37 PM »
well, for me, the more I listen, the better I like. And I wanted to dance, though dance trance that's not my age. Congratulations
Tim, I like, and the next time I'll become addicted
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Timothee
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August 12, 2011, 05:45:36 AM »
Thanks Azell, it means a lot...
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