C.R.O.A.D.(full version)

[elwoodblues1969]

Writing lyrics & conjuring up lyrical melodies are not my specialty,but I thought I'd give it a go for once.
Thanks to Wyatt's small,but impactful contributions,I feel the song is complete,as he added a nice touch. Hope you like..here are the lyrics...

Retreating back to the welcoming world again
To the only blanket of freddom I visit every now & then
All with a ticket to ride,nor without board or fare
Distance unaccounted for..no peering out a window...no delays..I'm always there

Transcendental transport,no estimation of destination
An exclusive path down the road,with no anticipation
I'll leave it all behind toward a land where I'm unaware of what I'll find
No one to save me,walking into a peril opaquely blind

Intricate schemes of themes...of the future...with no adhesion,or completion
No destination or affirmation....of self

Reality radiating through my window...thoughts racing through my head
Which ever way the wind blows
Time to collect myself & empty out of bed
I'm married to the debris,bound in my head

Time is all I have before me
Time to grab all that is for free

[Oren]

  ....... my favourite segment is from 3:11 onward. The whole song is, however, a creative landmark 

[elwoodblues1969]

Oren,

Thanks for the compliments & support-much appreciated!

Thom

[Wyatt]

Thom,


Could this be the beginning of a new creative direction??

I has all the makings..lovely song. 

Keep up the good work.



Wyatt

[elwoodblues1969]

Wyatt,

Thanks for the nice comments & support-glad you like the song-however though,I agree with Oren,that the latter part of the song is better(vocally).

That being said,I decided to put some overtime into this song and it's in progress as I write this ...to be continued....

Thom

[Wyatt]

Wyatt,

Thanks for the nice comments & support-glad you like the song-however though,I agree with Oren,that the latter part of the song is better(vocally).

I wasn't commenting as to whether the beginning or end of the song was better..simply glad to see the creative direction you are taking.



Wyatt