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Author Topic: Song for my son *update*  (Read 19902 times)
Laguna Rising
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« Reply #15 on: June 19, 2008, 06:17:26 PM »

Well, it's very hard to find something out of place in this mix.
I think it works very well for me, excellent production indeed.
Maybe the I'd cut a bit of the hi-freq of the kick drum but this is a personal taste, don't think there's something wrong with it ! I prefer the bassy/fat one vs the punchy/dry ones
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...and welcome to the newborn (...a bit late  Embarrassed )

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« Reply #16 on: June 21, 2008, 10:59:43 AM »

Thanks for listening (again).  Smiley

Well maybe you're right about the bass. It might by a bit too pushy, both soundwise and rhytmically.

Any more thoughts on the second version?
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« Reply #17 on: June 21, 2008, 11:42:57 AM »

Ok. I decreased the volume of the bass drum and simplified the rhythm for the verses.


* Talvin Jones - Noah (v1.11).mp3 (4688.7 KB - downloaded 837 times.)
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« Reply #18 on: June 21, 2008, 02:40:58 PM »

Hi,

for my ears version v1.1 ist the best. It's realy great! 

Andreas
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« Reply #19 on: June 21, 2008, 06:52:17 PM »

Hi,

for my ears version v1.1 ist the best. It's realy great! 

Andreas

I'm with Andreas on this.  Although all three versions were great I believe V1.1 is the best.
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« Reply #20 on: June 22, 2008, 10:19:56 AM »

Hmm...so you prefer that dominant bass drum in v.1.1?
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« Reply #21 on: June 22, 2008, 02:54:18 PM »

Hmm...so you prefer that dominant bass drum in v.1.1?

Yes
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« Reply #22 on: June 23, 2008, 03:12:24 PM »

Hmm...so you prefer that dominant bass drum in v.1.1?

Yes, Sir.
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« Reply #23 on: June 23, 2008, 04:41:42 PM »

Ok. Thanks for your opinion.
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« Reply #24 on: June 23, 2008, 11:53:46 PM »

Ok. Thanks for your opinion.

You’re welcome.

But just remember that is only my opinion. 

Also remember that this is YOUR song so do it the way YOU want it to sound.
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« Reply #25 on: July 09, 2008, 02:27:09 PM »

You're right.

This is the latest and hopefully final version. I should move on to something new. )


* Talvin Jones - Noah (v1.3).mp3 (4651.11 KB - downloaded 552 times.)
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« Reply #26 on: July 09, 2008, 07:03:29 PM »

Really can't make up my mind which I prefer, the version or the very first one. Probably this one by a whisker.
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« Reply #27 on: July 09, 2008, 10:58:57 PM »

It is a very tough call but I think this is it.

They’re all keepers!

Excellent song, mix and production.
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« Reply #28 on: July 11, 2008, 11:15:06 PM »

Thanks.  Smiley

As some people (including myself) still weren't completely satisfied this is version 1.4

I don't think I can do better than this.
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« Reply #29 on: July 13, 2008, 08:45:42 PM »

Removed the last version for this one with less aggressive guitars and mids.


* Talvin Jones - Noah (v1.5).mp3 (4557.58 KB - downloaded 432 times.)
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