Armistice (song)

[sabotai]

Hi,

This is a song I am going to enter in the KVR contest (thats why its so short).  Let me know what you think.  I'm not really sure how to describe it.

[Laguna Rising]

Hi Sabotai
This is a very simple track, it doesn't really take off, for me, sorry.
imo it lacks some kind of melodic content, some melody of any kind.
sounds is good, is just a matter of construction...

cheers

[sabotai]

Hmm yeah I suppose I should pick something that is more focused on melody for the audience at KVR.  I suppose I picked this song cause it was the easiest thing to cut down to 2 minutes.  Since as you say, its pretty simple.  Well I got off my butt and made a new track (the other one was 7 years old).  I like it more, although its not my best work.  I will admit my listening preferences are not too focused on complex melodies and that is reflected in the music I make as well.  I will post this new track here even though I can't figure out how to provide a direct link to it to post at KVR.  Back to the drawing board on that.

Thank you for your honest feedback!

[kara]

To post a direct link at kvr or anywhere else : right click on your song in your post and choose 'copy link'. That's it, now you paste the link anywhere 

k

[Moon]

Actually, there is great sound in this song, although I have to agree that I miss a strong lead to fill in a melody somewhere. I would defenitly keep on working on this one because I hear a great sound, but the work doesn't seem to be finished.
So I'm hoping for a second version here 

Moon

[Laguna Rising]

I like it more, although its not my best work.

Spectre :
Much more interesting ! cool sounds, and good rhythm
Keep on

Cheers

[spirulence]

Yeah, Spectre is much better. Time for me to go eat dinner.

Maybe you should try adding a little clickiness to some of the sounds?

[elwoodblues1969]

Hello,

Even though this song needs more structure,it's a great beginning for a song,as  you can dance it,relax to it and just zone out....I really like this quality.

Elwood