Kara-Moon Forum
May 08, 2024, 01:54:41 PM *
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
News: You can go back to the main site here: Kara-Moon site
 
   Home   Help Search Login Register  
Pages: [1]
  Print  
Author Topic: Wyatt's Emerald Sea version 2  (Read 5319 times)
MarioD
Kara-Moon Master
****
Posts: 4346


« on: October 11, 2008, 09:20:25 PM »

I thought I would start another thread about Wyatt’s Emerald Sea.

I took some of the suggestions that were submitted and added a percussion section to parts of this song.  However I did want to keep the feel I had in my first version so I also added some wind chimes and gongs to even things out.  I also deleted some of my rhythm guitar parts.

I hope you like it and as always I’m open to constructive criticism.

PS – I hope Wyatt likes this version

* Emerald Sea Ver 2.mp3 (3598.86 KB - downloaded 306 times.)
Logged

The older I get the better I was!
folderol
Kara-Moon Master
****
Posts: 5310

Who? Me?


WWW
« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2008, 10:17:11 PM »

I like what you've done here. Makes it even more 'drifty' Cool
Logged

If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
- Will
Oren
Moderator
Kara-Moon Master
*****
Posts: 5444


...just looking for clues...


« Reply #2 on: October 12, 2008, 09:01:00 AM »

I took some of the suggestions that were submitted and added a percussion section to parts of this song.  However I did want to keep the feel I had in my first version so I also added some wind chimes and gongs to even things out.  I also deleted some of my rhythm guitar parts.

Another expressive incarnation! (other than a haircut, I can't think of any pertinent suggestions...)
Logged

Wyatt
Kara-Moon-Collective
Kara-Moon Master
**
Posts: 2073



« Reply #3 on: October 12, 2008, 11:55:24 AM »

WOW!

You have added an interesting dimension here, Mario!

Energized, percussive, and focused..

Thank you for taking the time to add another dynamite
version of this. Great production.

Cool

Wyatt

Logged

kara
Kara-Moon, a site built by and for musicians
Global Moderator
Kara-Moon Master
*****
Posts: 4907


Music is my middle name


WWW
« Reply #4 on: October 12, 2008, 01:40:13 PM »

It's interesting to hear how many directions a song can take after the initial idea of the composer.
Certainly a creative approach Mario  Cool

k
Logged

_____oOo______ http://www.myspace.com/kaazduo

www.kara-moon.com, a site built by and for musicians
Support us at : http://www.mymajorcompany.com/Artistes/kaaz/
Laguna Rising
Kara-Moon-Collective
Kara-Moon Master
**
Posts: 1716



WWW
« Reply #5 on: October 19, 2008, 11:12:06 AM »

a sharp turn from the original direction but it works great.
It could be called 'Lost in the Emerald sea' since the atmosphere you build seems to suggest a feel of free sailing (following the wind and drift)

Cheers
Logged
Pages: [1]
  Print  
 
Jump to:  

Powered by MySQL Powered by PHP Powered by SMF 1.1.21 | SMF © 2015, Simple Machines Valid XHTML 1.0! Valid CSS!
Page created in 0.049 seconds with 20 queries.