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Hello,
This month the time limit is of 30 seconds and we are supposed to present a musically complete and meaningful idea within that time frame. If the title and my music clicks with you,my idea will complete. "Sunny Rains in the Plains" Does it communicate ? Or is it tolerable at least ?

Please do let me know what you felt, even if it did not connect.

Thanks.

Shrikant 

From a "feeling" point of view, it did "connect", and I enjoyed it. :)
 However, the sensation is of being presented a random sampling of a larger composition - interesting, but not complete in itself - without a definitive beginning or end, and lacking a coherent musical statement.

Oren,

Thanks for listening and letting me know what you felt.

That is very helpful.Thanks once again.

Shrikant

I liked very much what I heard.  However I did not think it was a “complete and meaning idea”!  I thought it was a teaser.  You know those 30 second fragments of a song on line stores play so you can hear part of what you might want to buy.

FWIW – I do think this is an excellent start of a song and I, for one, would like you to finish this one.  I was hooked in the first 10 seconds but left hanging there 20 seconds later.  I think this one is worth the effort to make into a complete song.

I love too, but the end is cut short too. But it is very difficult in 30 seconds! and ok with Mario to continue
good luck

Many Thanks,Mario and Azell.
You  made me think about taking it further and giving it a better structure.   

Thanks a lot.

Shrikant